For You:)

September 15, 2010
The way your eyes shine, you make the stars jealous
The warmth in your smile, can bring the universe to it's knees
You are beauty, in the purest of forms
You make me happy, and bring me up when I'm down
You keep me here, floating in the clouds





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hxcRocker said...
Nov. 25, 2010 at 4:25 am
I liked how you focused on the sky for your comparisons but it's missing your normal element that sets it apart from all the other poems like this.
 
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse replied...
Nov. 25, 2010 at 6:57 pm
This one is actually one of my favorites, it's really simple.  But it makes me happy every time I think about when I wrote it:)
 
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