I feel nothing

September 13, 2010
By NightBloomingJazmyne SILVER, Cumming, Georgia
NightBloomingJazmyne SILVER, Cumming, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
There are two kinds of writer: those that make you think, and those that make you wonder.
- Brian Aldiss


I feel nothing
two voices yell
plunging me deeper into an emotionless void
i feel nothing
the well continues to fill
with the salt water that has drained from my body
drowning my legs
as i look frantically for an exit
into a realm of dreams
i feel nothing
the whole begins to mend its way shut
but is yet again ripped open by your constant demeaning essesence
i feel nothing
my conscious mind
loses all depth and intelligence
and starts to fill itself with the very thing i fear
i feel nothing


The author's comments:
harsh times .. wrting is an outlet for bad feelings .. for me anyway :)

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