Fallen time

September 10, 2010
Fallen time,
Like tears through the years
Remembering the days
When we were ok.

Fallen time,
Like shreds of hope,
For things to come in place
When we know they just wont stay.

Fallen time,
like Staring into your eyes,
Wishing for love to return
When I know its gone.

Fallen time,
Will not stay,
Or wait for us
while we waste away.

So I return to you
A smile or two,
while our time,
Just falls away.

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LaShay_25 said...
Jan. 17, 2011 at 11:31 am
I love your first four lines, I think this is so awesome, keep writeing please =]
C.Jaee said...
Nov. 29, 2010 at 1:00 pm

This made me cry..

So... real... So true..

My favorite of all your work . , 

WhingsOfAnOutcast replied...
Dec. 12, 2010 at 1:04 pm
Thank you for the comment! X3
GangstaEyes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 24, 2010 at 3:32 pm
This is unbelievable. I feel like this was written specifically for me. The relatability you weaved into this is incredible and your wording is amazing. I love this so much - could you check out and comment on some of my stuff? I'd really appreciate it. Keep writing - you've got talent unlike anything I've ever seen!! :)
WhingsOfAnOutcast replied...
Sept. 25, 2010 at 12:58 am
o//o thank you so much! X3 I'm really glad you like it! and I will do that! I love reading other peoples work! X3 thank you again! X3 this makes me reallly happy! X3
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