Fallen time

September 10, 2010
By WhingsOfAnOutcast BRONZE, Victora, Texas
WhingsOfAnOutcast BRONZE, Victora, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"A sincere artist tries to create something which is, in itself, a living thing."~Painter William Dobell


Fallen time,
Like tears through the years
Remembering the days
When we were ok.

Fallen time,
Like shreds of hope,
Waiting,
For things to come in place
When we know they just wont stay.

Fallen time,
like Staring into your eyes,
Wishing for love to return
When I know its gone.

Fallen time,
Will not stay,
Or wait for us
while we waste away.

So I return to you
A smile or two,
while our time,
Just falls away.


The author's comments:
This is from a mix of experiencing life and some songs I've heard

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on Jan. 17 2011 at 11:31 am
Almost_Lover GOLD, Mission, South Dakota
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I love your first four lines, I think this is so awesome, keep writeing please =]

on Dec. 12 2010 at 1:04 pm
WhingsOfAnOutcast BRONZE, Victora, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"A sincere artist tries to create something which is, in itself, a living thing."~Painter William Dobell

Thank you for the comment! X3

on Nov. 29 2010 at 1:00 pm
TheSpiritOfMe GOLD, Fort Waynee, Indiana
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This made me cry..

So... real... So true..

My favorite of all your work . , 


on Sep. 25 2010 at 12:58 am
WhingsOfAnOutcast BRONZE, Victora, Texas
4 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A sincere artist tries to create something which is, in itself, a living thing."~Painter William Dobell

o//o thank you so much! X3 I'm really glad you like it! and I will do that! I love reading other peoples work! X3 thank you again! X3 this makes me reallly happy! X3

on Sep. 24 2010 at 3:32 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

This is unbelievable. I feel like this was written specifically for me. The relatability you weaved into this is incredible and your wording is amazing. I love this so much - could you check out and comment on some of my stuff? I'd really appreciate it. Keep writing - you've got talent unlike anything I've ever seen!! :)


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