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Forever is forever.
aaaaayou can't change that.
You can't change what is forever.
And what is not.
Forever is in many shapes and forms.
Forever is a hope.
Forever is a dream.
Forever is you.
And forever is me.
Forever is my love.
Burning bright.
Just for you.
Forever is my passion.
The passion I have once had.
The passion that glows.
In the dark shaddows of night.
Forever.
But I must admit,
This is only a dream.
Forever is forever.
But nothin is really
Forever.



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Poetry4Ever said...
Jan. 4, 2011 at 11:04 am:
The second line got messed up. It's supposed to be: And you can't change that.
 
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Jan. 6, 2011 at 7:47 pm :
I understood the 'and' part that you messed up...this is good! I like the ending; how it contradicts really everything else you say. I thought you were going to end it with "and nothing in between" but you didn't, which means it wasn't predictable and I like that!
 
Poetry4Ever replied...
Jan. 25, 2011 at 10:07 am :
Thank-you.
 
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