Pits of hell

September 6, 2010
By mask456 GOLD, Marietta, Georgia
mask456 GOLD, Marietta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
There is no fire without smoke

Tortured Souls walk this earth
Are we already in hell?
DO we walk for a cruel, cruel joke
Created by the Devil himself?
His tortured dolls
he sets a scene a play
Then we act it out
His laughter all around
He is the director
We his actors
We must act out of our own will
He threads sorrow
into the script
He cast us alone
into our sets
pushing our minds and souls
to the extreme
He whispers the lines into our ears
creating our story into our mind
We scream
He laughs
And encourages our demons
They are his friends
His producers
GOD can't save us
we are out of his reign
in the pits of hell
we lose our selfs

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on Sep. 24 2010 at 2:20 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

wow i actucally really like this. maybe you could check out osme of my stuff?


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