Our last night.

September 2, 2010
By elizabethr PLATINUM, Lynnville, Indiana
elizabethr PLATINUM, Lynnville, Indiana
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Our last night together;
a night of no peace.
This is a perfect example
of who not to be.
This is the worst example
of how life’s supposed to be.
This is not how I
envisioned my night;
how I wanted to spend
my last moments with you.


I envisioned a more..
peaceful setting.
Ya know, serene.
I wanted this tonight
to be the one night
where it all went right.
I wanted to hear kind words,
speak a language we
never really here.
But this is how it is,
I guess.

My last night with you;
a night without rest.
Rest for the mind, the body,
no rest for our weary souls.
This is it.
Doesn’t seem so appealing,
now does it?



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on Nov. 4 2010 at 5:28 pm
elizabethr PLATINUM, Lynnville, Indiana
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Me too..

Not a problem.^-^


katnip SILVER said...
on Oct. 25 2010 at 10:43 pm
katnip SILVER, Eureka, California
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Favorite Quote:
If you die in an elevator, be sure to push the Up button.

thanks for putting this into words i hate those nights




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