ingly.

August 27, 2010
By CopelandV SILVER, North Las Vegas, Nevada
CopelandV SILVER, North Las Vegas, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
"aspire, inspire, shine" - Me .


immensely,
creatively,
endlessly
waiting.

profoundly,
ambitiously,
inviting.
welcoming.

serenely,
patiently,
arriving.
deriving.

previously,
nostalgically,
melancholy.
surrounding.

freely,
openly,
comforting.

desperately,
impudently,
departing.

needing.
insecurely,
nonchalantly,
walking.

conclusively,
contradictorily,
infinitely,
ending.

You and Me.


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on Mar. 3 2011 at 8:09 pm
the.kanguru GOLD, Irvine, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Why is Jesus holding a machine gun?"
"Maybe it's part of his therapy."

the title of this poem automatically made me think back to mr. bingley from pride and prejudice. oh, rhyming.

while you used some remarkably awesome word choices in there, the poem lacks a common thread to tie it together for the reader except for the very last line. makes it kind of a vocab list, no?



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