my interpretation

August 25, 2010
By , phoenix, AZ
im lost
deep in insanity
my body wanting to combust
im wasting away
slowly disinigrating
like a corpse
im gone
just a mere shadow
a mere whisper in a cloud of vioces
my vioce is lost
mouth is dry with hurt
breath in
my throat and lungs burn
im none existant
im fading
into the walls
like paint
i cover my hurt
drown it
hoping it doesnt return
my eyes are dry
but my heart wet
from uncried tears
i feel pain
its to slight to notice
im immune to it
it no longer phases me
im like ice
cold . hard . melting.
im slowly melting away

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sleepyloon said...
Dec. 30, 2010 at 2:35 am
I think it's called being a teenager. This is one of those poems where your not really stoping to think, you're just writing it, huh? I write ones like this all the time. And now for the cliche: I like it. I'm a very critical person, so pat yourself on the back!!!!
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