Queen of a Broken Heart

August 23, 2010
By MusicLover21 BRONZE, Lubbock, Texas
MusicLover21 BRONZE, Lubbock, Texas
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I am the queen of my heart,
but I accidentally gave you the key.
You didn’t know you had it,
You never knew you used it.
However, I stand looking
at the shattered pieces,
that will never be the same.

I made a promise to myself that
no one could ever penetrate me
the way you did.
Presently, that promise is defective.

When happy-endings are on the line
You’re the one who comes
to mind.
All that could have been, has faded
In you words of silence.
One more night, one more dream wasted on you.

No one can save me the pain
you’ve caused me.
Don’t try to apologize or
Make things right
It’s too late.

In the end
I hope she’s all you
couldn’t find in me.

Maybe the timing wasn’t perfect,
But I think it would’ve been worth it.

For now,
I’ll lock up the hurt
Drown out the fantasy, that will never exist,
Put on a façade and
Act like everything is okay.

And I’ll
be queen
of a now broken heart.


The author's comments:
This is about a guy who I like but he doesn't have the same feelings. I wrote it in three days. It's also inspired by Mayday Parade- Three Cheers for Five Years.

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on Jan. 27 2011 at 7:05 pm
MusicLover21 BRONZE, Lubbock, Texas
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sounds good! :)

marei2331 said...
on Jan. 27 2011 at 6:56 pm
marei2331, Lubbock, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others, for beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness, and for poise, walk with the knowledge that you are never alone.

No not yet, i wrote a short story... and now i'm waiting. I really don't like the short story i wrote. But it's a start, I just thought I might as well post it. I'll let you know if it ends up on here! :)

on Jan. 27 2011 at 6:46 pm
MusicLover21 BRONZE, Lubbock, Texas
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Hey Mary!! Thanks! :)

Do you have anything on here?


marei2331 said...
on Jan. 27 2011 at 4:47 pm
marei2331, Lubbock, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others, for beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness, and for poise, walk with the knowledge that you are never alone.

Hey! It's Mary (from drama, and dance). I just wanted to say this is so good! (i might have already told you)

It says so much! Don't stop writing girl!


cherry102 said...
on Sep. 13 2010 at 8:59 pm
that poem is awesomesauce. it's sad and amazing at the same time. i hope he falls in love with you because you're worth alot more than he knows.




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