August 11, 2010
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The indescribable sense of misery Burns within me,
Burns me to the crisp,
Blackening my soul,
Leaving my heart delicately torched,
The sides crumble to ashes in time,
Eroding to nothing but dust,
My sins found me again,
The cruel punishment takes place,
Leaving nothing,
Only the sound of fate laughing in my ear,
As I watch my dignity break piece by piece

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be_silent said...
Sept. 7, 2010 at 9:41 am
picturing this in my mind made me tear up inside.. love the imagery.. you might have a career ahead of you.
_truth replied...
Sept. 7, 2010 at 5:25 pm
thank you. i appreciate it
Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 4, 2010 at 3:09 pm
I can accurately describe this piece as poetically depressing. I liked it. It speaks clearly of defeat and misery. The fifth and sixth lines were my favorites. Well done with this.
_truth replied...
Sept. 4, 2010 at 8:55 pm
thank you a lot       
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