Dizzy

August 7, 2010
By , McFarland, CA
Steaming, unsettling senses surround my soul.

This Jealousy entangles me judging unjustly.

I'm obsessively obliged over honrable human beings.

Why am i the opposite?

Banish blasted bandits of benevloence.

Balance Brain and Heart before its too late.

Depression diverts this.

Choice conquers compliance but cowardly me chances it

like a game of poker where I foolishly give

up my cards relying only on a stroke of luck.

losing everything... as if really care.

instead i choose to trust the skilled players.

Its like that, the way I act in life, hopeless beyond belief;

Like walking aimlessly down the path of purpose, yet stumbling stupidly along the way.

A part of me is Maddness; not caring who is hurt because I'm hurt, but

then the true part of me, she rarely comes out, shudders at the display:



Chaotic changes charge full speed

Energetically, escalating, enticing my cells.

soon enough, sense lost,

leads action

Lavishly drawn to frantic choices.

I'm numb.





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TeresaJeanC This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 2, 2010 at 10:18 am

so many of the poems of other peoples stuff all looks the same. this is so much more original! i love it!

p.s i would love your feedback on some of my stuff, constructive critisism always welcome.

 
theinbetween replied...
Jan. 13, 2011 at 9:04 pm
Thank I tried looking for your work but I'm new here so I'm not sure where its at. I would love to read it :) 
 
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