Phenomenal Women, I Am

July 26, 2010
By Kristen747 BRONZE, Detroit, Michigan
Kristen747 BRONZE, Detroit, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
You have to want to want to succeed to be successful in life.

Love is not an easy thing
That I have had to face
My cruel harsh days
Never fade away
When I see your face

It’s hard when I think about
Those lovely summer nights
You were my knight in shining armor
And everything was alright

I cried when you told me you loved you
And that nothing would ever change
But after you learned my weakness
I began to feel the shame
You began to take me for granted

I felt like an idiot
For telling you my game
I never thought that love
Would ever treat me this way

You’re cruel and unbearable
And I really need my space
It’s really over between us
So you most definitely cannot stay
I gained more strength
Since you wanted to treat me this way

Thanks to your selfish ways
I am a phenomenal woman
Ready to take on anything
Especially if it tries to break me
Or crush this spirit inside

The author's comments:
I was really upset and that gave me some inspiration to write this. I hope you enjoy it just as much as i did writing it. Please excuse the fact that there is no punctuation, but i really worked hard on it.

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