Thirst

August 4, 2010
My eyes
Have turned that brilliant red again.
I feel that familiar burn in my throat.
The flame burns, searing my mouth.
An unbearable pain.
But I supress it.
I deny it.
I ignore it.
This is not the time
Nor the place for it.
But soon I will give in.
And quench my thirst.
But not now.
Not in the prescence of my human friends.
I wait until they leave
To hunt.





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Kaptain said...
Aug. 30, 2010 at 12:33 pm

yea... you should cut off the vampire part :P

 

The rest is real good.. 

Please do look at some of mine if you have the time :)

 
Marlyre This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 29, 2010 at 10:00 pm
not from personal experience I hope? good stuff... read some of mine?
 
spiritualrevelationrevealspainandrevolution said...
Aug. 29, 2010 at 9:59 pm
good poem but me thinks you should cut back on the vampire thing
 
Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 29, 2010 at 2:27 pm
Very imaginative and well written, but a bit frightening.
 
lizzie.rose. said...
Aug. 29, 2010 at 2:36 am
i like it, as simple as that (:
 
condor said...
Aug. 28, 2010 at 7:34 pm
omg i love this poem! its so friggin awesome! its hard for me to explain why i like a poem but its easy for me  explain why i DONT like a poems. when i like a poem something in my head just says "ooh" and when i was reading this poem i was like "ooh" yeah i know im weird and confusing may be my point it ur poem rocks and i love it :) there much simpler ;]
 
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