I Am the Words

August 3, 2010
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I am the Words,
That take you away.
I am the words that turn night into day,
I am the Words.
I am the words that make your life bright,
And tell you not to go left,
But instead, right.
Do you know that I cared?
Did you ever think,
That I would truly be kicked to the roadside?
If you didn’t, then you are about to be caught unaware-
I am the Words!
I have not died!
I am the Words,
Who have made people cry.
I am the Words
Who lived on through
Time,
And shall not be finished
At the end
Of this line.





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pixiedust15 said...
Sept. 19, 2010 at 7:38 pm
Hmmm....i sense something here...uh...let me think. Got it. i sense..... a lovely poet full of emotion written in your poem. Amazing work! :D
 
aDreamer replied...
Sept. 20, 2010 at 9:08 pm
aw thanks:)
 
pixiedust15 replied...
Sept. 21, 2010 at 8:48 pm
you betcha! ;)
 
Jailei88 said...
Sept. 8, 2010 at 9:59 pm
I like it(:
 
aDreamer said...
Sept. 7, 2010 at 7:32 pm
i love getting feedback:) thanks soso much:)
 
GangstaEyes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 7, 2010 at 6:59 pm
Wow! I love this. It has such an easy flow and great word choice. I love that its open to how YOU personally wanna look at it. My favorite lines are "I am the words/ That make your life bright/ And tell you not to go left/ But instead, right" - when I read it, I took it kinda as a play on words. Like "But instead, write." I dunno, it just fits. Great writing! Keep it up and thanks for commenting my stuff! :)
 
Anne B. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 7, 2010 at 5:36 pm
If this is non-denominational thats totally cool, But this really makes me think of God. love it. :) good job!
 
iKissMyPen said...
Sept. 6, 2010 at 1:50 pm

Lovely spoken words!

Have you ever thought of preforming at a spoken word club? They would adore your work. (=

 
ForeverForgotten replied...
Sept. 6, 2010 at 8:52 pm
This is an amazing poem! great job! keep writing :)
 
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