Waiting Again

July 31, 2010
The flowers blossomed
But with the feeling of rain lingering

There is not much to do
Only sit out the storm

Living through a winter
For over a year

I can only imagine
When my spring will appear

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Aristine said...
Sept. 22, 2010 at 11:17 pm
The word choice in this poem was quite simple, but I liked it. It created clear images in my mind and it gets the emotion across cleanly. My suggestion would be to add some punctuation here and there to make it flow more smoothly. I can detect the underlying meaning, but you don't beat the reader over the head with it. Good job. :)
Drizzle29 replied...
Sept. 23, 2010 at 4:08 pm
thank you! :D i think it's nice, like simple yet meaningful :)
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