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A Love Note to a Suicide

Were you here I would kiss your lips,
Yet darkness steals the warmth and life
Were you here I would love you until the end of time,
Time ended before I was ready.
Hear me now: I love you so,
Yet that was not enough for you.
It makes me want to take the same path you did,
At the same time, I do not.
You were a coward, and I loved you.
Life got hard so you left, love and all.
I hope you hear me in your afterlife,
Hear the morning,
The life,
The love,
The moving on.
Yes, I loved you,
Now I love life.



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dream..catcher.. said...
Aug. 27, 2010 at 9:29 pm:
awh,,this is very good,,im guessing this really happend.? it doesnt sound like something that could just be made up,,your feelings sound so strong,,i really feel for you. i can relate. its a really good writing.
 
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sunrise_faerie said...
Aug. 27, 2010 at 5:27 pm:
great! connect with this piece very much! read some of my things?
 
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Marlyre This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 26, 2010 at 6:54 pm:
very empowering... based on true experience? read some of mine?
 
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