A Love Note to a Suicide

July 21, 2010
By pencilchick GOLD, San Jose, California
pencilchick GOLD, San Jose, California
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Favorite Quote:
The sleep of reason produces monsters -fransisco goya

Were you here I would kiss your lips,
Yet darkness steals the warmth and life
Were you here I would love you until the end of time,
Time ended before I was ready.
Hear me now: I love you so,
Yet that was not enough for you.
It makes me want to take the same path you did,
At the same time, I do not.
You were a coward, and I loved you.
Life got hard so you left, love and all.
I hope you hear me in your afterlife,
Hear the morning,
The life,
The love,
The moving on.
Yes, I loved you,
Now I love life.

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This article has 3 comments.

on Aug. 27 2010 at 9:29 pm
dream..catcher.. BRONZE, Dream Landing, Maine
1 article 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never frown because you never know who is falling in love with your smile.."

"The best things in life are unseen, that's why we close our eyes when we kiss, cry, and dream.."

"Normal is only a mode on a washing machine.."

awh,,this is very good,,im guessing this really happend.? it doesnt sound like something that could just be made up,,your feelings sound so strong,,i really feel for you. i can relate. its a really good writing.

on Aug. 27 2010 at 5:27 pm
sunrise_faerie GOLD, Fredericksburg, Virginia
11 articles 3 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
things are only as dark as you make them.
there is always beauty in every situation. look for it and you will see.
smile; sometimes it's all that will keep you from crying.

great! connect with this piece very much! read some of my things?

on Aug. 26 2010 at 6:54 pm
Marlyre PLATINUM, Kalamazoo, Michigan
21 articles 0 photos 208 comments

Favorite Quote:
"when you cry, do you waste your tears?" Madonna

very empowering... based on true experience? read some of mine?

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