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Life is...

Life is like a story...
With a beggining,
Leading to an end.
As the pages turn,
Life goes on.
As the chapters continue,
Different things happen.
But as you can see,
Everything changes.
Except one thing:
"The life within the story...."



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alynaj36 said...
Nov. 9, 2010 at 6:14 am:
I'm sorry that It took so long to reply to your comment! But thanks a lot and I'll be sure to check out your poems too! :)
 
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alynaj36 said...
Aug. 29, 2010 at 11:54 am:
Thanks everyone. I will check out your poems and writing also! Thanks again! :)
 
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JazzyMyne said...
Aug. 24, 2010 at 10:32 am:
felt interesting and true.
 
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windryder said...
Aug. 23, 2010 at 10:49 pm:
if find it interesting that you say life is like a story. i kind of always thought that life was a story. this poem makes me think so I like it.
 
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bclement412 said...
Aug. 23, 2010 at 8:47 pm:

this is a really genuine and honest poem that really makes sense to me. nice job

 

i hope you'll take a look and comment on my poem: http://www.teenink.com/poetry/free_verse/article/241394/431-Days-With-A-Concussion/

 
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Llama2341 said...
Aug. 23, 2010 at 8:42 pm:
It was really good cant wait to read others!!!
 
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GangstaEyesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 23, 2010 at 8:26 pm:
I love this analogy too! Its short. sweet, and really true. Could you maybe check out my poem Mental Snapshot? Its the same kind of thing...Great job, and keep writing!
 
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Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 23, 2010 at 4:30 pm:
Creative analogy. Luckily for the poet, there is an endless number of metaphors for life.
 
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WhiteBear said...
Aug. 23, 2010 at 4:27 pm:
this is a rwally good poem, mainly because it is so true, our lives our like a story, each with its own tale to tell. great analogy!! :)
 
alynaj36 replied...
Aug. 23, 2010 at 4:29 pm :
Thanks alot! Yea, i sort of jus tthought about it...and it made sense!
 
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