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what is past?

In this empty frame I see shame.
I see a dark haunting unwelcomed past.
But then I realized something,
There is no such thing as past,
Since it's always there with us.
No matter where we go,
Past will always exist within us
And haunt us to death and beyond
Forever and ever after all eternity.



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Boosflash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 7, 2010 at 7:07 pm
this was awesome captain. i love it when you answer your own questions, cause that means i dont have to.
 
condor replied...
Sept. 8, 2010 at 6:51 pm
oh xD i had to. its my part-time job :p
 
Boosflash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 8, 2010 at 11:45 pm
i hope they pay you well (evil laugh).....
 
condor replied...
Sept. 11, 2010 at 7:45 pm
oh yeah they pay me in trident layer gum or snickers king size ;) !!!! xD
 
thestorygirl said...
Aug. 31, 2010 at 12:37 am

Loved this!
It was beautiful, and you're so talented.

Amazing work.

 

could you check out "The Rush of Ember" for me please?

 
condor replied...
Sept. 4, 2010 at 1:57 pm
omg thx and sure i already love the title "the rush of ember" cant wait to read it ;]
 
darkangel09 said...
Aug. 30, 2010 at 12:16 am
ice and its so true! people think that things just stay in the past, but it always effects our future, even if we dont realize it
 
condor replied...
Sept. 4, 2010 at 1:58 pm
that was my point lol
 
Kaptain said...
Aug. 29, 2010 at 2:44 pm

That was nice work

 

if you have the time please go through some of my work as well :)

 
condor replied...
Aug. 29, 2010 at 6:55 pm
omg thx and ok i'll go throw ur work ;]
 
Kingfan123This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 29, 2010 at 10:00 am
Wow! Really liked this poem! Very good! You're a great writer! Well done!
 
condor replied...
Aug. 29, 2010 at 12:13 pm
omg thx so much ;]
 
Marlyre This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 28, 2010 at 9:59 pm
very intriguing thought pattern, never thought of that before, but so true! read some of mine?
 
condor replied...
Aug. 29, 2010 at 12:13 pm
thx so much! i dont think ive read any of ur work but i will right now! :] i promise :]
 
JOYOUS said...
Aug. 28, 2010 at 5:02 pm
Wow I really like this piece! I'll be sure to check out more poetry by you!! 
 
condor replied...
Aug. 28, 2010 at 7:28 pm
omg thank you this was like one of my first poems when i started writing but the more i wrote the crazier my poems became and the harder it got to figure out my messages
 
JOYOUS replied...
Aug. 28, 2010 at 7:38 pm
Haha yeah I understand. But only because, I write a lot!! :)
 
condor replied...
Aug. 29, 2010 at 12:19 pm
LOL YEAH :]
 
brax34 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 28, 2010 at 11:14 am
i really really like the idea, but it wasn't easy to figure out what you were saying
 
condor replied...
Aug. 28, 2010 at 7:27 pm
sorry it was like one of the first poems i ever wrote i just started writing by then
 
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