what is past?

June 28, 2010
By woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."


In this empty frame I see shame.
I see a dark haunting unwelcomed past.
But then I realized something,
There is no such thing as past,
Since it's always there with us.
No matter where we go,
Past will always exist within us
And haunt us to death and beyond
Forever and ever after all eternity.


The author's comments:
i wrote it at summer poetry club when we had to look at this empty frame and write what we see.

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on Sep. 11 2010 at 7:45 pm
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."

oh yeah they pay me in trident layer gum or snickers king size ;) !!!! xD

on Sep. 8 2010 at 11:45 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Get, Got, Gotten.

i hope they pay you well (evil laugh).....

on Sep. 8 2010 at 6:51 pm
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
19 articles 0 photos 106 comments

Favorite Quote:
"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."

oh xD i had to. its my part-time job :p

on Sep. 7 2010 at 7:07 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

this was awesome captain. i love it when you answer your own questions, cause that means i dont have to.

on Sep. 4 2010 at 2:03 pm
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."

thx for liking my poem and of course i'll check urs out ;]

on Sep. 4 2010 at 1:58 pm
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
19 articles 0 photos 106 comments

Favorite Quote:
"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."

that was my point lol

on Sep. 4 2010 at 1:57 pm
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
19 articles 0 photos 106 comments

Favorite Quote:
"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."

omg thx and sure i already love the title "the rush of ember" cant wait to read it ;]

kohakus SILVER said...
on Aug. 31 2010 at 12:37 am
kohakus SILVER, Ajax, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Like stones, words are laborious and unforgiving, and the fitting of them together, like the fitting of stones, demands great patience and strength of purpose and particular skill."
-Edmund Morrison

Loved this!
It was beautiful, and you're so talented.

Amazing work.

 

could you check out "The Rush of Ember" for me please?


on Aug. 30 2010 at 12:16 am
darkangel09 GOLD, South Huntington, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"I do not agree with what you have to say, but I'll defend to the death your right to say it."-Voltaire

ice and its so true! people think that things just stay in the past, but it always effects our future, even if we dont realize it

SWKit_kat GOLD said...
on Aug. 29 2010 at 8:11 pm
SWKit_kat GOLD, Janesville, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
Don't cry because it's over be happy because it happened

wow this is really good :) I liked it alot I'm a new member and just submitted a few works but they haven't been accepted yet when they do will you check 'em out?

on Aug. 29 2010 at 6:55 pm
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."

omg thx and ok i'll go throw ur work ;]

Kaptain SILVER said...
on Aug. 29 2010 at 2:44 pm
Kaptain SILVER, Dubai, Other
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That was nice work

 

if you have the time please go through some of my work as well :)


on Aug. 29 2010 at 12:19 pm
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
19 articles 0 photos 106 comments

Favorite Quote:
"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."

LOL YEAH :]

on Aug. 29 2010 at 12:13 pm
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
19 articles 0 photos 106 comments

Favorite Quote:
"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."

omg thx so much ;]

on Aug. 29 2010 at 12:13 pm
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
19 articles 0 photos 106 comments

Favorite Quote:
"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."

thx so much! i dont think ive read any of ur work but i will right now! :] i promise :]

on Aug. 29 2010 at 10:00 am
Kingfan123 GOLD, Charles Town, West Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Life moves pretty fast, if you don't stop to look around once in awhile, you could miss it."
and
"I'd rather stand alone for the right reasons than stand popular for the wrong."

Wow! Really liked this poem! Very good! You're a great writer! Well done!

on Aug. 28 2010 at 9:59 pm
Marlyre PLATINUM, Kalamazoo, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"when you cry, do you waste your tears?" Madonna

very intriguing thought pattern, never thought of that before, but so true! read some of mine?

JOYOUS GOLD said...
on Aug. 28 2010 at 7:38 pm
JOYOUS GOLD, Lehigh Acres, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Personally my favorite quote is: "It's better off living for today, than waiting for tomorrow." cause I completely understand it!

Haha yeah I understand. But only because, I write a lot!! :)

on Aug. 28 2010 at 7:28 pm
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
19 articles 0 photos 106 comments

Favorite Quote:
"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."

omg thank you this was like one of my first poems when i started writing but the more i wrote the crazier my poems became and the harder it got to figure out my messages

on Aug. 28 2010 at 7:27 pm
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."

sorry it was like one of the first poems i ever wrote i just started writing by then


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