Notice Me

June 27, 2010
By Angel1932 PLATINUM, Antioch, California
Angel1932 PLATINUM, Antioch, California
33 articles 0 photos 90 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love can touch us one time and last for a lifetime" ~ Celine Dion
"If you're going to pray don't worry... if you're going to worry don't pray." ~ Mariah Carey


I show happiness when sad you tell me something and i listen but who listens to my story, and sadness
I can't hold a grudge because thats not me.
I can't fight you because i will hurt inside
I can't tell you i hate you because its not me
I am Sweet, funny and kind. You only see her but I'm across the street, and you say you love her and i say i love you. And you never notice me, i can be the one who notice when you are sad and i can help you when your mad instead of putting you in the way of harm, i would protect you; but you never notice me. This sweet guy walks up to me and says "i love you and i have noticed you" then i smile, then you look at me and smile but its too late because he has already notice me.


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I hope everyone enjoys it! :)

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on Jul. 23 2013 at 6:47 pm
Angel1932 PLATINUM, Antioch, California
33 articles 0 photos 90 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love can touch us one time and last for a lifetime" ~ Celine Dion
"If you're going to pray don't worry... if you're going to worry don't pray." ~ Mariah Carey

Thank you for taking the time to read it! :) 

on Jul. 20 2013 at 10:33 am
DawnieRae BRONZE, Lancaster, Ohio
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I love this poem and I can totally relate!!!!

on Sep. 26 2010 at 2:07 pm
Angel1932 PLATINUM, Antioch, California
33 articles 0 photos 90 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love can touch us one time and last for a lifetime" ~ Celine Dion
"If you're going to pray don't worry... if you're going to worry don't pray." ~ Mariah Carey

thank you so much i really appreciate ur comment.

on Sep. 26 2010 at 7:56 am
elisianicole101 PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
34 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing ever truely dies, it just transforms into something beautiful

this is really good. and i like the fact that almost every girl can relate cuz we all kno we have that 1 guy that we hope deed ud but we think he doesnt and in the end its ment to be.. job well done(:


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