My Feelings Through Words

July 29, 2010
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He's gotta be the best guy,
He's so fly,
No Racism,
Just realism,
Rappin' bout life an livin',
While I'm just sittin',
And listenin',
I'm all ears,
Cause he starts the tears,
And when he raps,
You'll get it,
I bet it.
He's so deep,
Takes the time to think about it,
No regret in it,
Just rhythm and poetry,
He's got it going,
When I try to thrive,
And I don't succeed,
I do the deed,
Of listenin' to his disk 'cause it's still in my drive,
Since the day I got it,
I'm listenin' everyday,
It's such a release in every way,
I can't stop thinkin' about my idol,
Cause my life has a new meanin',
And what I'm saying is,
That he expresses my feelings through his,

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thewriteidea This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 22, 2010 at 5:27 pm

wow, i love the uniqueness of this poem. from the very first line to the last work, you had me grabbed and wanting more. i really like the message of this.

check out some of my work, too if you'd like. i really like this! keep writing!!(:

TheCreativeMiller replied...
Aug. 25, 2010 at 4:00 pm
Thanks, that is why I wrote it, to show everyone how good of an artist one of my friends are. TeenInk removed the name though.
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