My Feelings Through Words

July 29, 2010
By TheCreativeMiller SILVER, Mississauga, Other
TheCreativeMiller SILVER, Mississauga, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Vi Veri Veniversum Vivus Vici
[By the power of truth, I, while living, hαve conquered the universe] - V for Vendetta Movie

"Carpe diem, carpe noctem, carpe vitam." [Seize the day, seize the night, seize life.]


He's gotta be the best guy,
He's so fly,
No Racism,
Just realism,
Rappin' bout life an livin',
While I'm just sittin',
And listenin',
I'm all ears,
Cause he starts the tears,
And when he raps,
You'll get it,
I bet it.
He's so deep,
Takes the time to think about it,
No regret in it,
Just rhythm and poetry,
He's got it going,
And,
When I try to thrive,
And I don't succeed,
I do the deed,
Of listenin' to his disk 'cause it's still in my drive,
Since the day I got it,
And,
I'm listenin' everyday,
It's such a release in every way,
I can't stop thinkin' about my idol,
Cause my life has a new meanin',
And what I'm saying is,
That he expresses my feelings through his,
IN WORDS.


The author's comments:
This is dedicated to the young man who has taught me so much in life. He is so motivational, and he pushes me not only to do what I'm good at in life, but to thrive while doing it.

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on Aug. 25 2010 at 4:00 pm
TheCreativeMiller SILVER, Mississauga, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Vi Veri Veniversum Vivus Vici
[By the power of truth, I, while living, hαve conquered the universe] - V for Vendetta Movie

"Carpe diem, carpe noctem, carpe vitam." [Seize the day, seize the night, seize life.]

Thanks, that is why I wrote it, to show everyone how good of an artist one of my friends are. TeenInk removed the name though.

on Aug. 22 2010 at 5:27 pm
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."

wow, i love the uniqueness of this poem. from the very first line to the last work, you had me grabbed and wanting more. i really like the message of this.

check out some of my work, too if you'd like. i really like this! keep writing!!(:



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