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I can't stand those people
That think they're all that
The ones who like to poke fun
They don't understand that you Might never come back
No one thinks about that, they're so dumb
Why don't people get it
They don't understand, they don't care
Everyone thinks they've got you figured out
You don't know me, it isn't even fair
How many people can hurt you
Before you've truly give up
How close am I to the end
Just stop, I've had enough
Too many tears have been shed
Too many heartbreaks to count
Too many hearts nearing dead
Too many breath-takes to mount.




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Basketball23This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 2, 2011 at 12:38 pm:
I can relate to this too and the poem is absolutely amazing!!!
 
MercedesXO replied...
Jan. 6, 2011 at 2:10 pm :
awww i SO appriciate all your comments and nice complements:) thank youuuu! (=
 
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sasssgirrrl22 said...
Aug. 20, 2010 at 3:23 pm:
wow. this is awesome. i can really relate, too. people dont understand that you never really know all sides to a person. Therefore, u cant make judgements and continue to hurt them and put them down & expect them 2 stick around, waiting 4 the next blow. amazing(:
 
MercedesXO replied...
Sept. 18, 2010 at 7:44 pm :
awww thanks soo much :)
 
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