Suffocated

July 14, 2010
By MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
52 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I realize that life is risks. It's acknowledging the past but looking forward. It's taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven."
-The Dead Tossed Waves.


I can't stand those people
That think they're all that
The ones who like to poke fun
They don't understand that you Might never come back
No one thinks about that, they're so dumb
Why don't people get it
They don't understand, they don't care
Everyone thinks they've got you figured out
You don't know me, it isn't even fair
How many people can hurt you
Before you've truly give up
How close am I to the end
Just stop, I've had enough
Too many tears have been shed
Too many heartbreaks to count
Too many hearts nearing dead
Too many breath-takes to mount.



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on Jan. 6 2011 at 2:10 pm
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
52 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I realize that life is risks. It's acknowledging the past but looking forward. It's taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven."
-The Dead Tossed Waves.

awww i SO appriciate all your comments and nice complements:) thank youuuu! (=

on Jan. 2 2011 at 12:38 pm
Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
8 articles 13 photos 488 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm living in a shell with no soul" -Three Days Grace (World So Cold)
"Time still turns the pages of the book it's burned" -Avenged Sevenfold (So Far Away)

I can relate to this too and the poem is absolutely amazing!!!

on Sep. 18 2010 at 7:44 pm
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
52 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I realize that life is risks. It's acknowledging the past but looking forward. It's taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven."
-The Dead Tossed Waves.

awww thanks soo much :)

on Aug. 20 2010 at 3:23 pm
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
29 articles 0 photos 267 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary."
"Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game."
"Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I'm lying."

wow. this is awesome. i can really relate, too. people dont understand that you never really know all sides to a person. Therefore, u cant make judgements and continue to hurt them and put them down & expect them 2 stick around, waiting 4 the next blow. amazing(:


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