Remind me MAG

September 1, 2007
By Marika Tobak, Fort Bragg, CA

Remind me of the promises
Sleepless nights and lazy days
Holding you tight before you went away
Remind me of our wishes and dreams
The smells and the sounds and the feelings
Coming apart at the seams
Stay strong for me
So that I can be strong too
I need to know you’re there
Two within one and one within two
Remind me of your voice, your laugh
Remind me of who I am and can be
Help me achieve myself
Remind me what I promised
Don’t let go
Not of the memories
Not of the now
Remind me what you mean to me
I miss you
But I’m learning to cope
Remind what I know I haven’t given up
Remind me I’m not alone
I still miss you
Remind me of the best times
Remind me of the promises
I’ll never let go

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This article has 5 comments.

Zolenz DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 13 2014 at 4:35 pm
Zolenz DIAMOND, Musquodoboit Harbour, NS, Other
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Favorite Quote:
The pain that have cost us, the evils which have never happened.
- Thomas Jefferson

I agree with lovehate29 :) 

vampier BRONZE said...
on Apr. 22 2011 at 9:00 am
vampier BRONZE, Glasgow, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"my favorite thang about eating gumybares is knowing that thay wont fight you back when you bite there heads off.......!!!!!"

that pome is good reilly good (remind me) that wolud be that mane thang in that pome but that pome felt open alive.......

on Mar. 12 2010 at 8:26 pm
JennaMarie2344 SILVER, Alexander, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Music expresses that which cannot be said and on which it is impossible to be silent."
~Victor Hugo

This was truly sensational. I loved it, very well written dear (=

on Jul. 27 2009 at 5:23 am
ShakingChandeliers SILVER, N.Highlands, California
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Favorite Quote:
"A thin layer of trust had formed in my mind, like a scab."

"I preferred albums to the more modern eight tracks. Albums came with sleeves which reminded me of clean underwear."
-Augusten Burroughs

I love this piece as well. It reminds me of a lot myself lol. Good job, Marika.

on Jul. 6 2009 at 8:06 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

I really like this piece. I got really pulled into it when you said "Two within one and one within two..." Genius. Good job


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