Remind me This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

September 1, 2007
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Remind me of the promises
Sleepless nights and lazy days
Holding you tight before you went away
Remind me of our wishes and dreams
The smells and the sounds and the feelings
Coming apart at the seams
Stay strong for me
So that I can be strong too
I need to know you’re there
Two within one and one within two
Remind me of your voice, your laugh
Remind me of who I am and can be
Help me achieve myself
Remind me what I promised
Don’t let go
Not of the memories
Not of the now
Remind me what you mean to me
I miss you
But I’m learning to cope
Remind what I know I haven’t given up
Remind me I’m not alone
I still miss you
Remind me of the best times
Remind me of the promises
I’ll never let go

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.






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vampier said...
Apr. 22, 2011 at 9:00 am
that pome is good reilly good (remind me) that wolud be that mane thang in that pome but that pome felt open alive.......
 
JennaMarie2344 said...
Mar. 12, 2010 at 8:26 pm
This was truly sensational. I loved it, very well written dear (=
 
Courteney H. said...
Jul. 27, 2009 at 5:23 am
I love this piece as well. It reminds me of a lot myself lol. Good job, Marika.
 
lovehate29 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 6, 2009 at 8:06 pm
I really like this piece. I got really pulled into it when you said "Two within one and one within two..." Genius. Good job
 
Zolenz This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 13, 2014 at 4:35 pm
I agree with lovehate29 :) 
 
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