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Golden Hearts

June 21, 2010
By RFrocker23 PLATINUM, Ballwin, Missouri
RFrocker23 PLATINUM, Ballwin, Missouri
22 articles 1 photo 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened."


They say all is fair in love and war
But those words come from carnivores

What do the people who hide away
eating grass and lush greens say

They'd say love and war are far from just
war is fighting, love but lust

True fairness lives in hearts so dear
turned gold from bravery and lack of fear



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Kai17 GOLD said...
on Jul. 18 2011 at 7:37 pm
Kai17 GOLD, Spokane, Washington
17 articles 5 photos 340 comments

Favorite Quote:
*beepbeep*
"Where to, Miss?"
"To the stars."

I love the cadence, and the theme, and........the whole dang thing, I guess!

on Jul. 18 2011 at 6:43 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"

This poem has a great beat to it. I could recite it out loud! I also like the message that you promoted on love and war! Very creative!

on Jun. 3 2011 at 12:47 am
PerfectMGymnast DIAMOND, Parker, Colorado
57 articles 25 photos 633 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you don't leap you'lll never know what it's like to fly"

another great poem! i like your style and this was written so beautifully! :)

on Aug. 23 2010 at 2:57 pm
RFrocker23 PLATINUM, Ballwin, Missouri
22 articles 1 photo 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened."

random stranger, your comments make me warm and fuzzy on the inside.

iloverachel said...
on Aug. 23 2010 at 2:03 pm
your writing inspires me. it really speaks to the soal with imagry. i read everything you write. this is just lovely

on Aug. 20 2010 at 9:21 am
RFrocker23 PLATINUM, Ballwin, Missouri
22 articles 1 photo 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened."

Thank you so much! And I totally agree.

on Aug. 18 2010 at 2:49 pm
classicStara PLATINUM, Potomac, Maryland
26 articles 0 photos 28 comments
this is....beautiful in so many ways. i love it. and its true. we shouldnt be fighting, when there is already so many wars already