July 25, 2010
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As u dragged the blade across ur wrist praying for courage to press down,
u realized its not worth it and u through it down,
Whats the point of ending ur life when u don't know whats in store,
all the things u could do all the people u could help,
and yet u still get the urge to cut ur wrists,
u see the blood start oozing and u get scared and throw it down again,
u don't know when u'll get the courage but ur hoping it'll be soon,
U can't take life it's too long of a walk u dont know what to do...

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Valerie S. said...
Mar. 29, 2012 at 11:31 am

Greeeeat. (:

Just pick up your grammar and it's good to goo~

CallMeFelix said...
Aug. 25, 2010 at 7:33 am
Great Job! But as A.Dreamer said, you should definitely fix up the grammar. Keep writing!
Damara...C replied...
Aug. 25, 2010 at 9:56 am
is there anyway i could fix it up without getting it approved again     and there is such thing as poetic lisense so does it really matter??=) and thanks
CallMeFelix replied...
Aug. 25, 2010 at 12:06 pm
Haha, well, the whole "u" instead of "you" thing should be changed at least...and you used "through" instead of "threw" too. =)
Damara...C replied...
Sept. 10, 2010 at 3:03 pm
thanks see i am used to msn slang and i had this wrote on my computer for awhile and i forgot to write it right lol if that makes sense
A.Dreamer said...
Aug. 23, 2010 at 7:25 pm
I liked the meaning of this, and I thought it was very well written! If you fixed up the grammar, it would be absolutely amazing! Good job writing this!
cindywindy said...
Aug. 23, 2010 at 3:29 pm
Loves this :)
alynaj36 said...
Aug. 23, 2010 at 11:01 am
This is really good, and it has good meaning to it! You can write!
Damara...C replied...
Aug. 23, 2010 at 3:40 pm
thanl you so much i appreciate u reading my stuff i am waiting on 7 other things to be accepted now two short stories and five free verse poems check them out
alynaj36 replied...
Aug. 23, 2010 at 4:30 pm
okay! I will!
Damara...C replied...
Aug. 23, 2010 at 11:18 pm
thankyou = )
Vanessa replied...
Sept. 16, 2010 at 5:20 pm
wow this almost made me cry great  meaning
CandiceLauren17 replied...
Nov. 18, 2010 at 9:16 am
Pretty emotional there m'love, but it's great job:D<3
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