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The night I french kissed static or A donkey - kick to logic

July 11, 2010
By timevampire GOLD, Bellville, Ohio
timevampire GOLD, Bellville, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Quoting yourself makes you an ass.


Let me rearrange your dead body
Gluing together silent, fragile, broken bones
With an opinion. A plan. A method. A thought.
With a sticky mental conception you can't be taught.

It's something not present.
It's not been experienced.
It's not even real. But it's really resourceful.
It's poems in blue pen.
It's giggly girls with young men.
It's when a flower smiles at you.
It's when you laugh and hiccup to.
It's pressure built in the silent pauses between words.

Words slowly slipping, softly.
Words rippling from your mouth
An indistinct vibrating sound.
That only happens when you relate, yet don't understand.

"...And who could understand us?"
Said the poets making verbal love.
Though distance built it's wall
The language of our hearts screamed while folding the edges of the map.
Now we are perfectly unaligned.
This is what poetry is...

The cancellation of gender,
To neutralize belief.
The offset of eye color.
The soul and the soul
Speaking on a stormy wave.

The same wave that capsized
And drowns our words to LIFE.
Like some sort of backwards baptism
Or some sort of unholy resurrection.

"...And who could understand us?"
And you said " I'd rather live my whole life
A romantic tool then a heartless fool."
We cried all night. We begged the city saying.
"Please don't shake out another empty child!"
And when I stared I saw a key-hole in your eyes.
I tried to unlock it with my disguise.
But a poet can always see his or her cage.
(Even when it's not there.)
And your arms always looked like bars to me.
My dreams got tired of me running from them...So they left.

I promise you I would drown in the sea
A thousand times to get what I've thrown away.
Or is it all a self-serving lust?

"...And who could understand us?"


The author's comments:
This is for Boo.

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on Nov. 4 2010 at 8:12 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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What the front door.

ll a fait.

on Nov. 3 2010 at 9:02 pm
timevampire GOLD, Bellville, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Quoting yourself makes you an ass.

m a i l me here> ( mark my word sir at aol . com)  but no spaces and I'll send you my facebook on there hahaha it won't let me here.

on Nov. 2 2010 at 4:53 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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What the front door.

I tried that eons (?) ago. i never could find you. whats your facebook?

on Nov. 2 2010 at 4:46 pm
timevampire GOLD, Bellville, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Quoting yourself makes you an ass.

Yeah, that poem wasn't that great. But yours was awesome. You should totally creep me on face book since my name is in the magazine.

on Nov. 1 2010 at 10:00 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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What the front door.

i know right? "i told my brother, you see that poem right there"....-it just emphasizes the fact that we do our dances around each other.

on Oct. 27 2010 at 12:15 pm
timevampire GOLD, Bellville, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Quoting yourself makes you an ass.

hahaha... O, did you see your poem and my poem "I've Always Wanted" are on the same page in the last magazine? That's awesome just sayin'! :)

on Oct. 7 2010 at 1:31 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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What the front door.

it really pains me to say this... (sighs deeply) but that picture looks just like me. they really mastered the forehead...

on Aug. 23 2010 at 8:34 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

That was partly my intention.

on Aug. 23 2010 at 8:28 pm
timevampire GOLD, Bellville, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Quoting yourself makes you an ass.

"thesilentraven" that rememinds me of " never more"

on Aug. 11 2010 at 4:50 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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What the front door.

wait for me dear, here I come. i got two waiting anyway. its funny cause when i first read this i was like who's boo? then i was like oh...i get it. merci captain. and hey, who could understand this?

on Aug. 9 2010 at 12:02 pm
timevampire GOLD, Bellville, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Quoting yourself makes you an ass.

Thanks Boo I'm glad you like it. Now go breath some fire into your pen.

on Aug. 8 2010 at 10:02 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
What the front door.

"the language of our hearts screamed while folding the edges of the map." i had to reread it captain. i just had to. you're very talented captain. i love you much very.

on Aug. 6 2010 at 10:53 am
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

I love this; it's quite a delightful oddity.

French kissing- a donkey? That reminds me of a funny story...


on Aug. 5 2010 at 11:21 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
What the front door.

hello my dear. yeah, could've sworn i heard this title before by you. are you kidding me? they say my stuff is eccentric and crazy but this is really eccentric and crazy. i love it. i love it love it love it love it. please please please do your dance on the monkey. 5 stars.