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Please

July 9, 2010
By Anonymous

Baby, please put the knife down,
It makes me sad when I see the new scars
Darling, let me whipe your tears away,
Don't you know how beautiful your smile can be?
Dear, why are you sitting alone again,
Can't you tell I love being with you?
Love, tell me you love me again,
Have you a clue how much I love you?
Oh soul, I beg you to put the gun down,
Do you realize how how much I need you?
My heart! I'm on my knees begging,
Don't pull the trigger!
You'll blow my North Star from the Heavens
I'm forever lost without you, please, don't die
Lord, don't take my angel away
Please, I'll give anything
Just let him have missed his heart when he pulled that trigger
I'll trade the very life from these lungs
Please, don't let him die
Please, let my angel live


The author's comments:
Teen suicide is something people don't realize until it's too late to save the person, I wrote about this to cause awareness to girlfriends or boyfriends of suicidal teens. It won't be different for their case.

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on Aug. 4 2010 at 8:57 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
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This is so great!! its amazing how u can talk about something so many ppl want to ignore... If you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great! thanks and ur sooo good!!!