Stuck

July 9, 2010
By MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
52 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I realize that life is risks. It's acknowledging the past but looking forward. It's taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven."
-The Dead Tossed Waves.


What do you do when you can't feel anymore?
When you can no longer breathe?
When you should have left a long time ago?
When you're stuck.

You try to hold on,
But you find that there's nothing to hold onto.
You try to find meaning,
But there was never a purpose in the first place.
You try to forgive,
But they didn't care if you were disappointed to begin with.

You always loved me,
Yet you always gave up on me.
You never gave me a chance.
You didn't understand me,
You never took a glance.
You never chose your battles,
And started them instead.
There can never be two leaders,
One was left with the dead.

I gave you everything I had,
Yet you threw it right back in my face.
I finally realize there's no winning,
So I try to close the case.

But I'm stuck.
There's no way out.
No one wants me.
No one would hear my shout.
For happiness.
For love.
Or for a family that fit like a glove.

I can't grasp that I've been searching for the impossible,
Because in my heart nothings unstoppable.

So remember this,
If it's the last thing I say,
God is with me,
And I'm here to stay.


The author's comments:
I find that it's sometimes worse being stuck in everything I can't escape than having the one thing I never had....a family.

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on Aug. 5 2010 at 7:27 pm
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
52 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I realize that life is risks. It's acknowledging the past but looking forward. It's taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven."
-The Dead Tossed Waves.

thank you and i will.

on Aug. 5 2010 at 7:27 pm
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
52 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I realize that life is risks. It's acknowledging the past but looking forward. It's taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven."
-The Dead Tossed Waves.

aww thank you so much. that was nice of you.

on Aug. 5 2010 at 5:49 pm
Sileron-evol PLATINUM, Providence, Rhode Island
44 articles 0 photos 98 comments

Favorite Quote:
"we are captives of our own identities, living in prisons of our own creation"

I really like iht,its relative to some of the things im dealing with now. really good :)

on Aug. 4 2010 at 8:49 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

This is so amazing!! and emotional!! If you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!! thanks and ur sooo good!!!


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