Mom, When Would It Be

July 31, 2010
By VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
41 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that's all you can do


Compulsive hesitations
Of every questions
Trust from you are
worth as feather
Mom, how come you can’t me go
I have grown
To be sixteen, standing here thinking
Of how frustrating it is to walk a block away
From you
U’ll be afraid I’ll be hurt
When I look left to the right
On the streets
You taught me the simple things
I dearly appreciate with all of my heart
I was a gentle girl
But I have grown
Of every day I’m growing
Either from my 5’3 height
Or my petite body
And the pain and love of the world
To become a woman like you
My mom
I love you
But I do hope
U’ll let me go
Cuz I’m not your little girl anymore


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mom!!!!!

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on Aug. 5 2010 at 7:12 am
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
41 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that's all you can do

thank you n i did:)

on Aug. 4 2010 at 8:47 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thats so great!! i lvoe it and its so amazing!! If you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!! thanks and ur sooo good!!!

on Aug. 3 2010 at 11:25 pm
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
41 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that's all you can do

i know....i never really correct my words or anythin i gtto work on dat. thank you for the feedback,i greatly appricate it

on Aug. 3 2010 at 8:14 pm
DiamondsIntheGrass GOLD, Martinsville, New Jersey
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Worry is simply a misuse of the imagination.

this is nice, but some of the gramatical mistakes make it hard to understand.

on Aug. 3 2010 at 5:47 pm
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
41 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that's all you can do

i know it's jus them thinking the best of us but they should trust us to be ourselves n trust our instints cuz its a mistake we will learn but dats the way they love ya<# thank you for ur feedback

on Aug. 3 2010 at 2:32 pm
jassmine BRONZE, Fort Worth, Texas
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i like this! i feel the same way


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