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Compulsive hesitations
Of every questions
Trust from you are
worth as feather
Mom, how come you can’t me go
I have grown
To be sixteen, standing here thinking
Of how frustrating it is to walk a block away
From you
U’ll be afraid I’ll be hurt
When I look left to the right
On the streets
You taught me the simple things
I dearly appreciate with all of my heart
I was a gentle girl
But I have grown
Of every day I’m growing
Either from my 5’3 height
Or my petite body
And the pain and love of the world
To become a woman like you
My mom
I love you
But I do hope
U’ll let me go
Cuz I’m not your little girl anymore





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crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 4, 2010 at 8:47 pm
Thats so great!! i lvoe it and its so amazing!! If you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!! thanks and ur sooo good!!!
 
asiangurl replied...
Aug. 5, 2010 at 7:12 am
thank you n i did:)
 
DiamondsIntheGrass This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 8:14 pm
this is nice, but some of the gramatical mistakes make it hard to understand.
 
asiangurl replied...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 11:25 pm
i know....i never really correct my words or anythin i gtto work on dat. thank you for the feedback,i greatly appricate it
 
cameronjay said...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 2:32 pm
i like this! i feel the same way
 
asiangurl replied...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 5:47 pm
i know it's jus them thinking the best of us but they should trust us to be ourselves n trust our instints cuz its a mistake we will learn but dats the way they love ya<# thank you for ur feedback
 
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