Come On Home

July 8, 2010
By TSmitty247 GOLD, Saugus, Massachusetts
TSmitty247 GOLD, Saugus, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
A wise man once said "A person is smart, but people are stupid"
"Semper Fi"
"What doesn't Kill you makes you Stronger"
"Talk Shit Get Hit"
"Is this the Real Ceasers Palace"

Another day without you goes by
But your still on my mind
Not a moment goes by
Wishing you were here
Im staring at my door
Waiting for you to walk-in
I know it wont happen because of our past
If i give you a call
Do u promise to visit me at all
Sometimes i wish you would just come on back
All the moments we shared
and the smiles we had they were so big they'd stretch for miles
with the love we always had
Tonight I wish you come on by
Stop in and Say Hi

With all these thoughts on my mind
And the hurt i feel on the inside
I want you to come home
I feel soooo alone
I miss the love I felt on the inside
all the ideas we told
and as time past the love that would unfold
I dream of you each night that goes by
Baby I want you to come in and say Hi

The author's comments:
Its a story i wrote with intention to turn into a song

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on Aug. 10 2010 at 10:10 pm
Ok. This is not a poem nor a song. this is absolutely horrendous and being in the business 15 years I know a thing or to, about poetry/ song lyrics. This and all your other "work" if you can even call it that is honestly some of the worst content on this site. I really hope you don't continue doing this because someone in your state has no way of getting any better. This has no meaning behind it at all its all on the surface. This is absolutely horrendous I can't stress that enough. Please if you could delete your account and forget you ever did this. Also, if you think I am being harsh, you're wrong. People will tear u apart if they ever see this. Pursue a new hobby because this sure as hell isn't your cup of tea. Now just stop. seriously. fucking stop. it's just embarassing for everyone. If you sent these to a girl your life would be over.


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