I see him

July 8, 2010
I see him,
And I think of you.
Same eyes
Same hair
But he would never do
what you did.
He would never break my heart.
After all,
He was the one
Who helped me put it back together.
And when I start falling
He's there to catch me.
Which I can never say you did.

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bkcrider92 said...
Oct. 15, 2010 at 1:02 am
Ur a really good writer! Great job never stop writing cuz u got talent! ;)
olican16 replied...
Oct. 15, 2010 at 6:30 am
thanks that means a lot
olican16 said...
Aug. 20, 2010 at 5:13 pm

hanks so much for the comment and the rating. that means the world to me!!


God bless you!!!!

distant_dreamer said...
Aug. 20, 2010 at 3:38 pm
Wow I love this poem!! I can understand how you felt and what you were going through! Great Job!!!
olican16 said...
Aug. 6, 2010 at 1:50 pm
thanks... i think! lol thank u so much it means alot to me!!
GangstaEyes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 4, 2010 at 9:56 am
This is one of those poems that makes you feel confused, but still understand, if that makes any sense :P Relatable and honest, as per the norm! 
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