July 6, 2010
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Remember the pain,

you overcame with determination.
Remember the journey,

that brought you to this place.
Remember the people,

who gave so much for you.

Remember your first love,

one pure and even thought you lost it

You could never forget it.
Remember your parents,

who gave you a name and a strive

to improve.
Remember your fears,

how you triumphed them in the end.

Remember the greatest loss,

that brought you into the real world.
Remember a child’s innocence,

Full of questions and “what if’s”
Remember you first pet,

whom you loved so much your heart could burst.

Remember learning how to write,
when suddenly all you words found

a way to paper.
Remember the first trip to the mall,

when you still liked her taste.
Remember Junior High,

exploring freedom and adolescence.

Remember all the good,

every smile,

every laugh,

and every person that made you do so.

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nightingle said...
Aug. 2, 2010 at 11:35 pm
Totally awesome....i really can feel it.Can you please comment on mine i mean if you can :)
erikae said...
Jul. 28, 2010 at 9:34 pm
This is awesome. I tried to explain to someone how the past brings us to where we are and who we are. I don't think they got it, but this explains it perfectly. Amazing :)
LoverOfSong replied...
Jul. 31, 2010 at 4:11 pm
thx that means sooo much :)
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 28, 2010 at 2:24 pm
This is so great!!! i love it!!!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!!! thanks and ur really good!!!
LoverOfSong replied...
Jul. 31, 2010 at 4:11 pm
thx i will!
andshesfearless said...
Jul. 28, 2010 at 9:33 am
this is an awesome poem!
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