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Savior of the Stars

July 6, 2010
By MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
52 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I realize that life is risks. It's acknowledging the past but looking forward. It's taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven."
-The Dead Tossed Waves.


Compel the stars forth
An abundance of light set free
Collected together as one
They would present their advisable plea

Excuse their beauty at once
Ignore their joyful souls
Present them with a plan
They would agree to blatantly fall cold

Disguise your joy with anger
At what they had committed
A crime worthy of great danger
Every soul is now readmitted

No accidental assumptions
Of a greatness that lie beyond
False dreams sadly wished upon
A shooting star that once plunged on

Watchful eyes would pounce
Hopeful souls would soar
Now that the matter is flounced
Once again to the world of before



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on Jul. 28 2010 at 3:11 pm
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
52 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I realize that life is risks. It's acknowledging the past but looking forward. It's taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven."
-The Dead Tossed Waves.

thanks a bunch, and sure ill deff check out your work!

on Jul. 28 2010 at 2:11 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Wow i love this!! This is so descriptive!!! i love it!!!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!!! thanks and ur really good!!!


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