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is that my heart or fireworks?

July 6, 2010
By ellebelly SILVER, Keller, Texas
ellebelly SILVER, Keller, Texas
7 articles 2 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
yesterday is history tomorrow is a mystery today is a gift that's why its called the present


as i look into the sky
and see sparks everywhere
it reminded me of a feeling
i would just like to share

as the fireworks explode
and the sparks fly apart
it has many similarities
to my exploding heart

that's what my heart looks like
everytime you are talking to me
i never knew what it looked like
but now i can clearly see

as it bursts and booms
and brings smiles to faces
is exactly wha i feel like
and my heart beat races

so thats what its like
its what i feel about you
my heart is like fireworks
i hope you can feel it too


The author's comments:
this is for a very special friend of mine...:)

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on Aug. 11 2010 at 12:12 pm
Collin13 SILVER, Eden Prairie, Minnesota
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Go big or go home

short, sweet, and straight to the point! very cute:)

on Aug. 10 2010 at 10:14 pm
Marlyre PLATINUM, Kalamazoo, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"when you cry, do you waste your tears?" Madonna

the 2nd quatraine sealed the deal for me... great connection! read some of mine?

on Jul. 31 2010 at 3:38 pm
aLine1417 PLATINUM, Nogales, Arizona
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"It's hard to wait around for something that you know might not happen,but it's even harder to give up,when you know it's everything you ever wanted"

i simply loved it(: that's how i feel about someone right now. check out some of my stuff whenever you can please!

on Jul. 28 2010 at 2:08 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

This is so creative!!! i love it!!!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!!! thanks and ur really good!!!