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Near To Love, Far From Each Other

July 22, 2010
By VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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Words don’t capture how I feel
About all the moments you made me smile
Lifting my eyes to something new
I never felt once before until now
The compliments given to me
Makes me want to kiss you over and over
While you are there in California
Fighting against everyone
And I’m at Wisconsin
Taking on lonely walks
Listening to music
Glistening rains that falls
Wishing you to be here with me
Hoping to meet you here to thee
One person who wants to be in your arms
The worsen inside of me locks in me
When I get lonely of missing your voice
Fallen out of place
When tears are not shy
And drops one by one
When I’m in bed
Wishing on one star
To lay next to you
To once feel your warmth by my side
Feel your every breath through my hair
As I lay on your stomach
Smiling for hours
I have no clue to put into words
But it’s the 3 words I once feared
Until you reopened my eyes
It’s the 8 simple letters
I love you

© Yisrawayl G., Philadelphia, PA

The author's comments:
this is about me and joe. he's in California and i'm at Wisconsin. We are not dating but i had fallen for him slowly. we both don't believe in long distance relationship but our feelings for one another are strong. as i love him
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VickyLove92 PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 23 2011 at 10:46 am
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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i know u commented a while ago but i didn't realieze you commented on one of my poems. i'm truly sorry. it's very not kind of me to do that to you. thank you so much. i'm reading my past poems and it touches me how the obstacles i conquered to be who i am. i'm glad you enjoyed it and hopefully you read my other new poems i have posted
Alcanno DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 3 2010 at 2:39 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Wow wow wow - this totally captured my feelings about a similar distance problem... But my guys isn't as far as Cali :P Great stuff!
VickyLove92 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 3 2010 at 10:01 am
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that's all you can do

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aww thank you, it means alot to me n my writings:)
KirstynAlexandra PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 3 2010 at 12:21 am
KirstynAlexandra PLATINUM, Baltimore, Maryland
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great poem.. it tells a nice story :)
VickyLove92 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 9:52 am
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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thank you very much...dont u worry i will continue writing:)
VickyLove92 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 9:51 am
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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awwwww thank you for the comments, i wanna say it means alot for reals. i wanna let people know how i feel n hopefully can relate to. im glad ya did chica. thankz
Deiyjuan GOLD said...
on Jul. 27 2010 at 2:20 pm
Deiyjuan GOLD, St. Petersburg, Florida
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Awww nice poem. There was a time I could relate to this, but I hope everything works out. Keep writting! =]
ShenelleCrystal SILVER said...
on Jul. 26 2010 at 8:40 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
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wow , omgosh this amazing ! I think every girl comes to a point in life when they feel this way . GREAT WORK ! :]
VickyLove92 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 26 2010 at 2:58 pm
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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thank you,it means alot
VickyLove92 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 26 2010 at 2:58 pm
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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thank you very much....im happy you liked it.
VickyLove92 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 26 2010 at 2:57 pm
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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thank you...but me n joe wouldn't end up together, it's not like im doubting but in my guts n in my heart i know dat becuz the age difference and i feel kinda scared if we do meet but thank you tho, it means alot.
VickyLove92 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 26 2010 at 2:55 pm
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that's all you can do

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awwwww thank you for tellin me u so could relate to me. i wanna say thank you:) i hope u n him will be together or hopefully see each other 
stephiigiirl BRONZE said...
on Jul. 25 2010 at 8:07 pm
stephiigiirl BRONZE, Fort Smith, Arkansas
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oh wow, this is beautiful, and the same situation i am in..i live in new york, yet the kid im falling for lives in cali..
Thesilentraven PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 25 2010 at 10:46 am
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Beautifully written. The words seem really heartfelt. I hope that you and Joe end up together.
silent_reader BRONZE said...
on Jul. 24 2010 at 9:18 pm
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very pretty
waywithwords GOLD said...
on Jul. 24 2010 at 9:14 pm
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this is AWESOME!!! :)