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In a Moment

June 24, 2010
By Danica SILVER, Avondale, Arizona
Danica SILVER, Avondale, Arizona
7 articles 0 photos 105 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It is our choices, that show who we truly are, far more than our abilities." -- Albus Dumbledore


It takes but a moment for emotions to change
confidence to fail
pleasure to be replaced by pain.

Yesterday joy sparkled in your eyes like crystals
conviction supplied your soul with strength.
With open wings you soared through both sun and rain
but today in your cocoon you remain, unable to fly the extra length.

In a moment you traveled through life backwards
beginning as the butterfly, then shutting yourself in the cocoon.
What happened to your conviction, your strength?
The crystals in your eyes now melt down your cheeks, joy crushed like a deflated balloon.

It takes but a moment for emotions to change
confidence to fail
pleasure to be replaced by pain.

But as you remain the swathed caterpillar
as frustration bubbles and salty tears stain your cheeks
you’ve forgotten your strength doesn’t lie in accomplishments or looks or judgments
for in these you will fail; you’ll always feel small and meek.


Your strength comes from the wings you’ve forgotten were there
they’ve never left you – even in the cocoon.
Enchanted wings that lift you through clouds and supply the strength to soar
They are an identity, a love, a composition of life’s varying tune

It takes but a moment for emotions to change
certainty to be fulfilled
despair to be replaced by delight.


The author's comments:
Although I wrote this as a free verse poem, I suppose it could also be song lyrics to an inspirational-type song; it only needs music :)

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on Jul. 27 2010 at 7:30 pm
Alice_in_Wonderland GOLD, San Clemente, California
16 articles 0 photos 620 comments

Favorite Quote:
“I could give up, I could stay stuck, or I could move on, So I put one foot front of the other, No no no nothing’s gonna break my stride, “ –David Archuleta (The Other Side of Down)

Wow! That was soo sweet!I loved it! great job! :)

Danica SILVER said...
on Jul. 27 2010 at 3:16 pm
Danica SILVER, Avondale, Arizona
7 articles 0 photos 105 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It is our choices, that show who we truly are, far more than our abilities." -- Albus Dumbledore

Wow, thanks, that's great to hear!

wild18 SILVER said...
on Jul. 27 2010 at 11:20 am
wild18 SILVER, Tampa, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
Forget about the people in your past theres a reason they didn't make it to your future.

Wow, this actually gave me goosebumps. I understand exactly what you're saying :)

Danica SILVER said...
on Jul. 26 2010 at 8:45 pm
Danica SILVER, Avondale, Arizona
7 articles 0 photos 105 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It is our choices, that show who we truly are, far more than our abilities." -- Albus Dumbledore

Thanks to both of you!  It really means a lot to me!

on Jul. 26 2010 at 8:26 pm
yourliesarecutex3 BRONZE, Springfield, Ohio
1 article 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life, he realized, was much like a song. In the beginning there is mystery, in the end there is confirmation, but it's in the middle where all the emotion resides to make the whole thing worthwhile." - Nicholas Sparks (The Last Song)

This is both inspiring, and just plain amazing. I envy your writing so much, I can't even explain it in words.

runnermom said...
on Jul. 26 2010 at 3:07 pm
Great job!  How true these words really are!

kugdude said...
on Jul. 26 2010 at 1:51 pm
that is so inspiring to me, you have no idea!!  Keep up the fantastic work!

Danica SILVER said...
on Jul. 26 2010 at 12:19 pm
Danica SILVER, Avondale, Arizona
7 articles 0 photos 105 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It is our choices, that show who we truly are, far more than our abilities." -- Albus Dumbledore

Really? Thanks! It wasn't about one person in particular, just that universal feeling that when something goes wrong or you're feeling down for some reason, you can't do anything.  But the truth is, you can! :D

Danica SILVER said...
on Jul. 26 2010 at 12:16 pm
Danica SILVER, Avondale, Arizona
7 articles 0 photos 105 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It is our choices, that show who we truly are, far more than our abilities." -- Albus Dumbledore

Thanks, your comments are definitely helpful!

on Jul. 26 2010 at 11:48 am
This was very well written and like the organization. Well done!

kugdude said...
on Jul. 26 2010 at 11:14 am
I think this one is my favorite!  What inspired this one? Are you referring to anybody in particular?  This could be lyrics to a song!!  Love it!!!!

Danica SILVER said...
on Jul. 24 2010 at 12:22 pm
Danica SILVER, Avondale, Arizona
7 articles 0 photos 105 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It is our choices, that show who we truly are, far more than our abilities." -- Albus Dumbledore

Thanks so much! :)

on Jul. 24 2010 at 8:29 am
skywriter PLATINUM, Hood River, Oregon
24 articles 11 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The first draft of anything is crap."

I like it. Well written. You're right, It could also be a song.