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The Favorite One

The favorite one;
Always there,
Always one step ahead;
The favorite one,
Always better,
Always without a care;
As they say how bad I do,
And how good you did;
Point out my mistakes,
And reward you,
on your improvements;
They leave me to hide;
In a dark cave of shame,
anger, and hate;
For some reason,
I've always envied.
How you have been the first,
to do the best.
There hasn't been one thing,
I could do.
Without you right there;
-Always one step ahead
leaving me behind...
And being so blind.



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sunkissed-devil14 said...
Jul. 23, 2010 at 5:07 pm
im actually rly mad.. cuz this wasnt finished haha :) yeahhh.. but i couldnt fix it so ill post the rest later and all those who read my comments will be able to see it
 
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