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June 24, 2010
By RaafayAwan PLATINUM, Multan, Other
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RaafayAwan PLATINUM, Multan, Other
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me and my life!

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Rain O Rain,
Come and wash away my pain.
It's been a long journey,
through this valley of woe,
It's going all wrong,
I've been trying much though.
Where ever there is hope,
the darkness falls,
Where ever I find an opening,
the doors are locked.
But I will keep on trying,
until the day is dawned,
And will never give up,
till the doors are thrashed.
I pray to thee Almighty,
don't ever make me fall,
It's for that very day,
I want to stand all tall.

© Shana G., Cross Plains, WI

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I had written this poem when I was having the worst possible time of my life...
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