Free me

June 29, 2010
By kayx3ftw PLATINUM, Woodbridge, New Jersey
kayx3ftw PLATINUM, Woodbridge, New Jersey
46 articles 4 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You don't get another chance, Life is no Nintendo game"- Eminem


The past is my future,
The future is my past.
I’m stuck in the middle,
My soul cannot last.
The truth is locked up,
Where others can’t see.
All they do is put a dirty reputation on me.
They think I don’t know the secrets they hide
They think I’m stupid, they think I’m blind
They don’t realize what they’ve done to me,
They’ve ruptured my life and won’t set me free.
But like a bird I will fly, up into the sky
Not hearing their snickers
Not hearing their lies.


The author's comments:
Written for a project about the book Th1rteen R3asons Why by: Jay Asher :) I recommend that book. Its amazing.

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on Jan. 11 2011 at 9:01 pm
XxDream_in_ColorxX SILVER, Ocean Springs, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
“It is easy to forget how full the world is of people, full to bursting, and each of them imaginable and consistently misimagined.” -John Green, Paper Towns

Haha Well I'm not exactly saying I like all depressing ones or anything.  In fact, this one seems to show how strong she is in the end of the poem.  I just like a LOT of variety.  =]  Your romance ones seem pretty good, but some are a little bit too cliched, that's all.

on Jan. 11 2011 at 6:22 pm
kayx3ftw PLATINUM, Woodbridge, New Jersey
46 articles 4 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You don't get another chance, Life is no Nintendo game"- Eminem

Thank you. lol I have some depressing one's as well :)

on Jan. 7 2011 at 9:53 pm
XxDream_in_ColorxX SILVER, Ocean Springs, Mississippi
8 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
“It is easy to forget how full the world is of people, full to bursting, and each of them imaginable and consistently misimagined.” -John Green, Paper Towns

I really like this piece of yours in particular.  A lot of yours are about romance (not saying they're bad, they're good too =] ). 

Nothing to critique about this poem.  All I can say is, I completely know what you're talking about.  (Even if this was a project for that book)


on Jul. 23 2010 at 12:27 am
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

omg i think ive read that!! is it about a murder?? this is great!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that wuld be awesome!!! especially to anonymous!!! thanks and ur really good!!!




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