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The past is my future,
The future is my past.
I’m stuck in the middle,
My soul cannot last.
The truth is locked up,
Where others can’t see.
All they do is put a dirty reputation on me.
They think I don’t know the secrets they hide
They think I’m stupid, they think I’m blind
They don’t realize what they’ve done to me,
They’ve ruptured my life and won’t set me free.
But like a bird I will fly, up into the sky
Not hearing their snickers
Not hearing their lies.





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XxDream_in_ColorxX said...
Jan. 7, 2011 at 9:53 pm

I really like this piece of yours in particular.  A lot of yours are about romance (not saying they're bad, they're good too =] ). 

Nothing to critique about this poem.  All I can say is, I completely know what you're talking about.  (Even if this was a project for that book)

 
xx3kay3xx replied...
Jan. 11, 2011 at 6:22 pm
Thank you. lol I have some depressing one's as well :)
 
XxDream_in_ColorxX replied...
Jan. 11, 2011 at 9:01 pm
Haha Well I'm not exactly saying I like all depressing ones or anything.  In fact, this one seems to show how strong she is in the end of the poem.  I just like a LOT of variety.  =]  Your romance ones seem pretty good, but some are a little bit too cliched, that's all.
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 23, 2010 at 12:27 am
omg i think ive read that!! is it about a murder?? this is great!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that wuld be awesome!!! especially to anonymous!!! thanks and ur really good!!!
 
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