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My eyes tear
my head rushes
my heart pounds
my stomach leaps
my hands shake...

all because of you

your face
your smile
the light in your eyes
make me feel invincible

seeing you
makes me strong

knowing you're
always there
makes me feel

you mean the wold to me
and you make me feel as
light and beautiful
as a butterfly
fluttering in the sky
on a warm summer's day

I love you

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.sunshine. said...
Oct. 24, 2010 at 12:39 pm
I honestly loved this piece.!
NikkiG replied...
Oct. 24, 2010 at 4:13 pm
Thank you!! :)
Lovebug07 said...
Jul. 23, 2010 at 12:02 pm
This is absolutely amazing, I love it!!! This is something that so many people can relate to, and you did a fantastic job of putting it into words. You are a very talented writer. If you could read my work that would be awesome, cause I would love to get your opinion on them. Once again great job!!! :)
NikkiG replied...
Jul. 23, 2010 at 10:40 pm

Thank you! That means a lot to me :)

I will definitely check out your work!

crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 23, 2010 at 12:11 am
Wow i lvoe this!!! its so relatable!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that wuld be awesome!!! especially to anonymous!!! thanks and ur really good!!!
NikkiG replied...
Jul. 23, 2010 at 8:05 am
aww thank you :) i will definitely look at your work :)
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