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Love is a double-edged sword,
A figureless carousel of dreams and hopes and broken glass.
A piano missing all the keys, and yet,
Singing a melody of tears.
Love is a great, big, thump!
Right in the center of your chest,
That swoons you left to right in embarrassment.
And,
Love,
Is a mysterious figure,
On a Sunday afternoon,
Who brushes his hair back with two fingers and says,
I love you.





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MarieAntoinette2012This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 15, 2013 at 11:01 am
This perfectly describes my boy friend actually, very lovely.
 
DivyaSingh said...
Mar. 27, 2013 at 3:30 am
Nicee work. i love it :)
 
HPRGSuperFan This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 1, 2013 at 11:22 pm
Beautiful! I love the vivid imagery and the captivating comparisons. Awesome job; A++!
 
PargaranThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 4, 2012 at 7:29 pm
ADORABLE!!
Loooooved it. :)
 
pen_ups said...
Sept. 11, 2012 at 8:59 am
I really like this poem , it's short and sweet and so true. 
 
TaurusGal This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 23, 2012 at 11:51 am
Very Very great, especially so short
 
jeseer This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 18, 2012 at 8:49 pm
Great worK! Makes me happy:) haha
 
Just_Me96 said...
Aug. 26, 2010 at 9:57 pm
This is really good =)
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 28, 2010 at 3:32 am
Thanks !!!!!!!
 
ANDREAX0OX18 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 18, 2010 at 5:13 pm
i like this one a lot :)
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 18, 2010 at 6:18 pm
Thanks so much!!!!
 
Laura14 said...
Aug. 10, 2010 at 11:48 am
Awww... this is so good and so sweet! I really liked this and your other work too!
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 10, 2010 at 3:19 pm
Thankyou so much!!
 
valeriemarie94 said...
Aug. 9, 2010 at 9:37 pm
amazing :)
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 10, 2010 at 3:19 pm
ThankyoU!!!
 
naliba said...
Aug. 9, 2010 at 9:16 pm
I liked this very much, it says so much in so little. Bravo! 
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 10, 2010 at 3:19 pm
Thankyou so much!!!!
 
TerraTAZz said...
Aug. 6, 2010 at 6:20 am
One word AMAZINGGG
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 8, 2010 at 4:16 pm
Thanks so much!!!
 
Dominicangirl said...
Aug. 5, 2010 at 7:04 pm

wow really good :).

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