Love.

June 17, 2010
By crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.


Love is a double-edged sword,
A figureless carousel of dreams and hopes and broken glass.
A piano missing all the keys, and yet,
Singing a melody of tears.
Love is a great, big, thump!
Right in the center of your chest,
That swoons you left to right in embarrassment.
And,
Love,
Is a mysterious figure,
On a Sunday afternoon,
Who brushes his hair back with two fingers and says,
I love you.



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on Apr. 15 2013 at 11:01 am
MarieAntoinette2014 DIAMOND, Scottsburg, Indiana
54 articles 2 photos 238 comments

Favorite Quote:
Isn't it ironic? We ignore the ones who adore us, adore the ones who ignore us, love the ones who hurt us, and hurt the ones that love us.

This perfectly describes my boy friend actually, very lovely.

on Mar. 27 2013 at 3:30 am
crazyShruti BRONZE, Haridwar, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Life is about trusting your feelings and taking chances, losing and finding happiness, appreciating the memories, learning from the past, and realizing people change.

Nicee work. i love it :)

on Jan. 1 2013 at 11:22 pm
HPRGSuperFan GOLD, Indian Creek, Illinois
12 articles 6 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
If people never did silly things nothing intelligent would ever get done.
--Ludwig Wittgenstein

Beautiful! I love the vivid imagery and the captivating comparisons. Awesome job; A++!

on Oct. 4 2012 at 7:29 pm
Pargaran SILVER, New Glasgow, Other
6 articles 3 photos 123 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are, and say what you feel. Because those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind."
-Dr. Seuss

ADORABLE!!
Loooooved it. :)

pen_ups said...
on Sep. 11 2012 at 8:59 am
pen_ups, Wilmington, North Carolina
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I really like this poem , it's short and sweet and so true. 

TaurusGal GOLD said...
on Mar. 23 2012 at 11:51 am
TaurusGal GOLD, Hong Kong, Other
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Very Very great, especially so short

on Mar. 18 2012 at 8:49 pm
jeseer PLATINUM, Auburntown, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"Truth without love is a killer, but love without truth is a liar. The Bible commands us to have both: It says to speak the truth in love."--Elliott Nesch
"To love another person is to see the face of God."--Victor Hugo

Great worK! Makes me happy:) haha

on Aug. 28 2010 at 3:32 am
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thanks !!!!!!!

on Aug. 26 2010 at 9:57 pm
Just_Me96 BRONZE, S.I., New York
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This is really good =)

on Aug. 18 2010 at 6:18 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thanks so much!!!!

AndreaD GOLD said...
on Aug. 18 2010 at 5:13 pm
AndreaD GOLD, West Chester, Pennsylvania
11 articles 6 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
According to Greek mythology, humans were originally created with four legs, four arms and a head with two faces. Fearing their power, Zeus split them apart, condemning them to spend their lives in search of their other half.

i like this one a lot :)

on Aug. 10 2010 at 3:19 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thankyou so much!!

on Aug. 10 2010 at 3:19 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

ThankyoU!!!

on Aug. 10 2010 at 3:19 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thankyou so much!!!!

Laura16 GOLD said...
on Aug. 10 2010 at 11:48 am
Laura16 GOLD, Baldwin, Wisconsin
12 articles 12 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"No, I would not want to live in a world without dragons, as I would not want to live in a world wihtout magic, for that is a world without mystery, and that is a world without faith." Coincidence is God's way of remaining Anonymous." ~Einstien

Awww... this is so good and so sweet! I really liked this and your other work too!

on Aug. 9 2010 at 9:37 pm
amazing :)

naliba BRONZE said...
on Aug. 9 2010 at 9:16 pm
naliba BRONZE, St-luc, Other
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I liked this very much, it says so much in so little. Bravo! 

on Aug. 8 2010 at 4:16 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thanks so much!!!

on Aug. 8 2010 at 4:16 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thanks np!!!

TerraTAZz GOLD said...
on Aug. 6 2010 at 6:20 am
TerraTAZz GOLD, Sapulpa, Oklahoma
18 articles 3 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nobody goes through life without a scar.







-carol burnett

One word AMAZINGGG


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