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Love.

June 17, 2010
By crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.


Love is a double-edged sword,
A figureless carousel of dreams and hopes and broken glass.
A piano missing all the keys, and yet,
Singing a melody of tears.
Love is a great, big, thump!
Right in the center of your chest,
That swoons you left to right in embarrassment.
And,
Love,
Is a mysterious figure,
On a Sunday afternoon,
Who brushes his hair back with two fingers and says,
I love you.



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on Aug. 5 2010 at 7:04 pm
Sileron-evol PLATINUM, Providence, Rhode Island
44 articles 0 photos 98 comments

Favorite Quote:
"we are captives of our own identities, living in prisons of our own creation"

wow really good :).

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on Aug. 5 2010 at 1:45 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thankyou!!

on Aug. 5 2010 at 1:45 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thanks !!! ;)

on Aug. 5 2010 at 7:11 am
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
41 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that's all you can do

beautiful words bout love....it was aa beautiful poem

on Aug. 4 2010 at 11:01 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1985 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

awwwwwww =..) very sweet!! i liked it alot!!! beautiful word choice there :)

on Aug. 4 2010 at 10:01 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thanks :)       

emigini said...
on Aug. 4 2010 at 9:31 pm
emigini, Irving, Texas
0 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love is friendship set on fire." - Jeremy Taylor

aw, i like this a lot. the imagery is beautiful. 

on Aug. 4 2010 at 5:57 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thanks!!!!!!

on Aug. 4 2010 at 5:56 pm
starlight26 GOLD, Miramar, Florida
11 articles 7 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
*life isnt about pretending to be something you're not. It about being who you are and finding someone
who loves every bit of it."

"Life's tradegy is that we get old too soon and wise too late"

Awwwww! so sweet!

on Aug. 3 2010 at 7:44 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thankyou!!!!

Zzzie SILVER said...
on Aug. 3 2010 at 7:08 pm
Zzzie SILVER, North Canton, Ohio
8 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Think positive, or I'll have to start singing."

Very good! :)

on Aug. 2 2010 at 10:22 am
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

i will!!! thankx!!!!

Shweta SILVER said...
on Aug. 2 2010 at 1:38 am
Shweta SILVER, Saharsa, Other
5 articles 0 photos 40 comments
Very nice....I love it!Please comment and rate mine if you can..i've only one work right now though,others are pending...

on Aug. 1 2010 at 10:13 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thankyou!!!

Emilia901 GOLD said...
on Jul. 31 2010 at 7:23 pm
Emilia901 GOLD, Moreno Valley, California
11 articles 4 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Fiction reveals truths that reality obscures." Jessamyn West

Wow that was really amazing! I loved it and the ending was like the cherry on top! =^_^=

on Jul. 29 2010 at 11:41 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thanx thats so great!!!

on Jul. 29 2010 at 11:40 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thanks soo much!!

on Jul. 29 2010 at 7:37 pm
despurlock DIAMOND, Morgantown, West Virginia
79 articles 0 photos 179 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The heart has its reasons which reason does not know." -Pascal, Pensees, 1670

Again, I love it, esp. the last three : "On a Sunday afternoon,/ Who brushes his hair back with two fingers and says,/ I love you." They made this poem for me. 5 stars and a Favorite! Keep it up :) You have such a talent!

on Jul. 29 2010 at 6:20 pm
TheRealAriel1995 PLATINUM, Highland Village, Texas
30 articles 6 photos 203 comments

Favorite Quote:
"See in what peace a Christian can die." - Joseph Addison
"How come everyone will come to your´╗┐ funeral, but nobody will come see you when you are living?"

omb!!!! girl this is gooooddd!!!! you have such emotion sewn into the seams of this poem!!!! itz magnificent! keep it up!!!

on Jul. 29 2010 at 6:07 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thankyou soo much!!!