Toxic

June 16, 2010
By JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
61 articles 36 photos 216 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I'm not"
"Somewhere betweeen us talking, you saying I deserve better, and you making me laugh when I wanted to cry, I fell in love with you."


Pain is only one emotion

Or a series of emotions

Pain can contain love

Even hate

But pain itself

Doesn’t hurt

It’s the other emotions

That once mixed with pain

Create the agony, and sorrow

Emotions alone

Have no power

But once ignited with others

The flames spread

Love contains no feeling

But when you combine

Love with heart ache

Will create a fire

Large enough

To burn down

A forest

Fear, by itself

Is empty

But after it mingles with

Past experiences

It creates anxiousness

So remember that

When emotions are mixed

The result is toxic


The author's comments:
I wrote this to try to make people think. Please comment and tell me what you think.

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on Aug. 7 2010 at 12:35 pm
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
61 articles 36 photos 216 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I'm not"
"Somewhere betweeen us talking, you saying I deserve better, and you making me laugh when I wanted to cry, I fell in love with you."

Thank you!

on Aug. 7 2010 at 2:04 am
DannyKid33 PLATINUM, Pleasant Hill, California
34 articles 2 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't ever let the media tell you what to look like. You're beautiful the way you are. Stay beautiful, keep it ugly." - Gerard Way.

i understand completely. i loved how you made emotins jst seem like chemicals and science it was awesome good job




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