Suicide

June 16, 2010
By ElenaSnapz PLATINUM, Western Springs, Illinois
ElenaSnapz PLATINUM, Western Springs, Illinois
25 articles 6 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
Writing is a passion from within, you can write about anything that your heart desires and nobody can tell you that it is wrong.

Loving somebody is like giving them a gun and hoping they don't pull the trigger


"I am vain, just like when a rose thorn draws blood from a human,worthless"

She is sick of everything,-
mostly life.
Endless cuts up to her elbows,depression-
its dark and lonely.

Life seemed great before;happy-
now took a wrong turn of life-
spiraling down.

Nobody notices she is depressed-
everything feeling fake each day.
Her life surrounded with people-
but who actually cares.

Who'd thought the cheerleading captain-
would want to take her own life.
She gets ready for her final act,
writing notes to loved ones-
her last good-byes.

Her cell phone rings right before,
she can put that belt around her neck.
Three simple words,change everything-
I Love You.


The author's comments:
What inspired me to write this poem is that each day a lot of teens do attempt suicide,and that most of them do have good IQ's and are people you wouldn't think would commit suicide.

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on Oct. 9 2010 at 8:34 am
ElenaSnapz PLATINUM, Western Springs, Illinois
25 articles 6 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
Writing is a passion from within, you can write about anything that your heart desires and nobody can tell you that it is wrong.

Loving somebody is like giving them a gun and hoping they don't pull the trigger

thats true, but its a heck of a dark place

on Aug. 30 2010 at 4:14 pm
ElenaSnapz PLATINUM, Western Springs, Illinois
25 articles 6 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
Writing is a passion from within, you can write about anything that your heart desires and nobody can tell you that it is wrong.

Loving somebody is like giving them a gun and hoping they don't pull the trigger

haha sometimes i forget its a poem too, and thank you and sure i'll check some of your work as well

Diana101 GOLD said...
on Aug. 27 2010 at 5:42 pm
Diana101 GOLD, Grove City, Ohio
13 articles 0 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
"God's delays are not God's denials"

Opps!!! This poem was great!! I got so wrapped into it, I kinda forgot it was a poem.

-Diana101


Diana101 GOLD said...
on Aug. 27 2010 at 5:39 pm
Diana101 GOLD, Grove City, Ohio
13 articles 0 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
"God's delays are not God's denials"

This was a great story!!! It is great if you can write stories like this without personal experiences!!! Wonderful!!

*Could you check out my story?

-Diana101


on Aug. 21 2010 at 8:34 pm
clairexaudrey PLATINUM, Bethel, Connecticut
41 articles 3 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most beautiful people we have known are those who have known defeat, known suffering, known struggle, known loss, and have found their way out of the depths. These persons have an appreciation, a sensitivity, and an understanding of life that fills them with compassion, gentleness, and a deep loving concern. Beautiful people do not just happen."
-Elizabeth Kubler Ross

That makes this piece even better, that you can create something like this without personal experience.

on Aug. 21 2010 at 4:38 pm
ElenaSnapz PLATINUM, Western Springs, Illinois
25 articles 6 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
Writing is a passion from within, you can write about anything that your heart desires and nobody can tell you that it is wrong.

Loving somebody is like giving them a gun and hoping they don't pull the trigger

i think thats what inspired me,

i never had suicidal thoughts ever,but i put myself in their mind and i was able to write this


on Aug. 21 2010 at 9:59 am
clairexaudrey PLATINUM, Bethel, Connecticut
41 articles 3 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most beautiful people we have known are those who have known defeat, known suffering, known struggle, known loss, and have found their way out of the depths. These persons have an appreciation, a sensitivity, and an understanding of life that fills them with compassion, gentleness, and a deep loving concern. Beautiful people do not just happen."
-Elizabeth Kubler Ross

This is amazing. It is sadly true, that so many teens think they are worthless. If each person got a text like that, so many souls would be saved.

on Aug. 19 2010 at 1:02 pm
ElenaSnapz PLATINUM, Western Springs, Illinois
25 articles 6 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
Writing is a passion from within, you can write about anything that your heart desires and nobody can tell you that it is wrong.

Loving somebody is like giving them a gun and hoping they don't pull the trigger

Thank You :)

on Aug. 18 2010 at 7:03 pm
BaileyBaby13 BRONZE, Enumclaw, Washington
2 articles 4 photos 75 comments
oh my gosh....amazing. incredible. five stars.


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