June 16, 2010
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"I am vain, just like when a rose thorn draws blood from a human,worthless"

She is sick of everything,-
mostly life.
Endless cuts up to her elbows,depression-
its dark and lonely.

Life seemed great before;happy-
now took a wrong turn of life-
spiraling down.

Nobody notices she is depressed-
everything feeling fake each day.
Her life surrounded with people-
but who actually cares.

Who'd thought the cheerleading captain-
would want to take her own life.
She gets ready for her final act,
writing notes to loved ones-
her last good-byes.

Her cell phone rings right before,
she can put that belt around her neck.
Three simple words,change everything-
I Love You.

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Diana101 said...
Aug. 27, 2010 at 5:39 pm

This was a great story!!! It is great if you can write stories like this without personal experiences!!! Wonderful!!

*Could you check out my story?


Diana101 replied...
Aug. 27, 2010 at 5:42 pm

Opps!!! This poem was great!! I got so wrapped into it, I kinda forgot it was a poem.


TheUnheardVoice replied...
Aug. 30, 2010 at 4:14 pm
haha sometimes i forget its a poem too, and thank you and sure i'll check some of your work as well
clairexaudrey This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 21, 2010 at 9:59 am
This is amazing. It is sadly true, that so many teens think they are worthless. If each person got a text like that, so many souls would be saved.
TheUnheardVoice replied...
Aug. 21, 2010 at 4:38 pm

i think thats what inspired me,

i never had suicidal thoughts ever,but i put myself in their mind and i was able to write this

clairexaudrey This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 21, 2010 at 8:34 pm
That makes this piece even better, that you can create something like this without personal experience.
TheUnheardVoice replied...
Oct. 9, 2010 at 8:34 am
thats true, but its a heck of a dark place
BaileyBaby13 said...
Aug. 18, 2010 at 7:03 pm
oh my gosh....amazing. incredible. five stars.
TheUnheardVoice replied...
Aug. 19, 2010 at 1:02 pm
Thank You :)
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