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Judge me, if you desire to be ignored

You can judge me but I'm not changing.
You can look me in the eyes, and I won't look away.
You can yell over me, but I won't stop talking.
You can frown at me, and I'll smile.
But no matter what you try to do to me I'll never stand down.
My feet are planted.
I'm growing every minute.
I'm learning every mistake.
I'm smiling because I want to.
This is honest.
This is real.
You can't stop me once I have my mind set.
If you don't know me, then try to.
If you don't want to know me, then back off.
If you want to hurt me, just know I can take it.
If you want to help me, just know I'm stubborn.
If you want to make me cry, just provide the tissues.
If you want to brighten my day then be my sun.
If you want to rain on me, buy my umbrella.
If you don't want to hear me talk then buy some ear plugs.
If my music's too loud then walk away.
If my hair's a mess buy me a hairbrush.
You gotta problem with my sweat pants then don't look down.
It's that simple.
You'll get no wheres complaining.
Doing is the success.





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Dominicangirl said...
Jul. 20, 2010 at 4:44 pm

Wow this is like...AMAZING!. i could relate, really good. please comment, nd check out my work. iwould really like to know what you think :)

 

 
TFaye23 replied...
Jul. 20, 2010 at 5:19 pm
Thank you very much(: And yeah I can assume a lot of people feel this way, so I thought it be good to put it into word. And alright, I'll make sure I check them out!
 
cece replied...
May 3, 2011 at 4:31 pm
I posted this on my face book people need to see this
 
Sencere said...
Jul. 17, 2010 at 12:59 pm
I love it 5 stars and trust everyone feels like that at some point but most don't realize it
 
TFaye23 replied...
Jul. 17, 2010 at 1:23 pm
Thank you! And I bet a lot of other people fell that way too. It took my a while to realize how I felt about it. And then I just started writing this and ever since then I've been standing and holding my ground! It feels really good too. Haha, thank you for rating and commenting! I appreciate it. (-:
 
Sencere replied...
Jul. 17, 2010 at 6:40 pm
your welcome and i feel the same way but my feelings are mostly with standing up to my family even if it makes them unhappy because i know it will make me happy eve if sometimes it means being different
 
TFaye23 replied...
Jul. 17, 2010 at 11:38 pm
Yeah. Ditto. I stand up to my family and friends. Like recently I've moved because of MY choices and I had to stand up to MY parents. So I know exactly what you mean.
 
Sencere replied...
Jul. 19, 2010 at 9:19 pm
i would try that but don't the resouces or the money and besides it seems like wherever i go i find or run into someone thats my family or is a friend of the family
 
TFaye23 replied...
Jul. 20, 2010 at 9:20 am

Well yeah, I mean I'm living with my Mother now. But it was something that I needed to do for myself. I hope you have an alright time standing up for yourself! Just remember it is about you this time.

~Taylor(-:

 
Sencere replied...
Jul. 20, 2010 at 4:43 pm

yeah i know i live with my mom too we don't get along she is always trying to get rid of me but im going to virginia for 3 days come monday and she's super happy about that im not so happy though

~Tyra~

 
Sencere replied...
Aug. 9, 2010 at 8:46 am
can you check out my poems and comment
 
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