Graduation

June 17, 2010
By abmusiclover DIAMOND, Hyde Park, Vermont
abmusiclover DIAMOND, Hyde Park, Vermont
94 articles 3 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't tell us how it ends because were the ones who wrote the end."
-The Academy Is..


The caps thrown on
the gowns on tight
now it's time
for me to start my life
graduations here
diplomas in hand
now it's time
to strike up the band
College is within our reach
time to hear our parents preach
which path to go
which school to choose
now for all
the after high-school blues
but what's in store we do not know
but now watch all the faces glow
hear your named called one by one
graduation is almost done
and when it is were on our way
to start a brand new day
in fact a life
begins a new
everything i say is true
who we'll meet and what we'll do
you know now that it's up to you
Congratulations from the crowd
you know that now they have all been wowed
to see you go from there to here
the parents yell
begin to cheer
knowing that your almost here
you'll cry you'll laugh
walk down your path
done it is
so off you go!

The author's comments:
I wrote this in honor of my graduation : )

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on Dec. 12 2010 at 4:44 pm
SMWells PLATINUM, Carlisle, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Some truths best left unspoken.

My! I hope you enjoy scoldind. You sertenly are good at Actualy...I find negitave coment reasuring. I know this sounds odd. But I get worried when out of thirty poem that I send to Gran for critisism she only thinks one kneeds ajusting. For it is only nateral to asume that means she's not being honest so as to spare my feelings. I don't have delicate feelings. As you noticed or I wouldn't have been so rude to you. I supose you can glote over that coment. But I shall not asume you will in diference to your feelings wich I seam to have injerd.

on Dec. 12 2010 at 4:36 pm
abmusiclover DIAMOND, Hyde Park, Vermont
94 articles 3 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't tell us how it ends because were the ones who wrote the end."
-The Academy Is..

Your ratngings show you dont like them. i actually was already in the midst of crying about some very tramaticatic things when iI checked my email- and keep your Criticism constructive not Negetive!

on Dec. 12 2010 at 4:15 pm
SMWells PLATINUM, Carlisle, South Carolina
22 articles 0 photos 294 comments

Favorite Quote:
Some truths best left unspoken.

Oh there's know need to be so difensive. I don't hate your poetry at all. And though I'll agree I'm not a good critic. An auther is suposed to at least think critisism over to see if it can be of any help. I've had people tell me some of my poems stuped. And other people said the same poems were realy good. Ervery opinion is diferent. And know matter how temperd I get when I realy don't like something. I'm still only one opinoin. OK? And for all i know other people might realy like all the ones I think are pothetic. This is not really an opoligy. But that's because my bigest flaw has alwase been a fear of opoligys. Kind of silly really. But I'll try to keep my more negative coments to myself. Sound fair?

on Dec. 12 2010 at 12:57 pm
abmusiclover DIAMOND, Hyde Park, Vermont
94 articles 3 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't tell us how it ends because were the ones who wrote the end."
-The Academy Is..

I don't even understand what your trying to say: a word of advice Stop commenting on all my poems if u hate them!!!!!!!!

on Dec. 12 2010 at 8:35 am
SMWells PLATINUM, Carlisle, South Carolina
22 articles 0 photos 294 comments

Favorite Quote:
Some truths best left unspoken.

I take it there was no repsons. Some people don't have a lot of manners.

on Jul. 15 2010 at 12:31 am
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

This is really good!! i can feel the emotion!!! if you could please rate and comment my work that would be great!! thanks and u r really good dont stop!!!




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