My demise #1: The amazing show case- Raven

June 17, 2010
By Sania GOLD, Aroura, Colorado
Sania GOLD, Aroura, Colorado
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Just sitting in my 'room' contemplating my demise
and it will be a huge surprise
to those of you who cry,
because I never left my room
I was always hiding from you because
I was to shy to trust in you
and I was shy to show you why
I cried, and now you know
I wonder...
why is it a surprise
to you?
That I never lied.
To you Im just a prize.
To show me off like Im an
object in a cage
and so you call it a room,
to me it shows little respect
I will sit here trapped for ever
up here for you people as a showcase
it's dark and I fall victim
to the nights...
when I can get a quiet moment
from you and all your costumers
who buy a ticket to see me wither
and die
they call me Raven.
black oily hair and blue eyes.
I feel carnivorous
Im hungry
I long for dark weepy nights
and eating souls.
and so they call me
To stay here...
it will be my demise.
So surprise!
For I have died.

The author's comments:
Its about an 20 year old woman who is trapped in a cage they call Raven's room. They always laugh at her. And one day raven dies and people start to cry. Raven dies because she cannot live through any weepy nights while devouring peoples souls. She is truly Ravenous.

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on Jul. 15 2010 at 12:21 am
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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