Unknown base of jealousy

May 24, 2010
By MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.


Where this anger spites from,
seems like a bitter place-
in the bottom of my heart.
Why it stings so sharply
I can not say,
I wish it didn't.
I trust him..
Is it that I don't trust her?
No..
I have no reason to not trust her.
But then why..
why does this twinge bother me?
..How do I stop this feeling
with no base,
no air to blow it up?
There aren't even pictures
of why i should consider it
in my head.
No thoughts
about anything really happening;
so why does hot tears
threaten my eyes?
I am never the type
to fall to something
as low and undignifying
as jealousy-
one of human kind's
greatest enemies.
I have never let it control me.
But I can't help to wonder..
why is it hitting me now,
so strongly?

The author's comments:
Hmm how does this sound? Would like some opinions and comments on this please.. so I know how accurate the feelings are :) ThankYou!!!

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on Jul. 23 2010 at 10:13 pm
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

I'm glad you like it :) And thankYou for your feedBack!

on Jul. 13 2010 at 12:06 pm
tianaxbiddy SILVER, Wareham, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Plot is character revealed by action."




-Aristotle

ur words are spot on. this yr was tghe first yr i felt jelously and i didnt kno y. I love this poem it is spot on! :~D




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