Late Night Thinking.

February 27, 2010
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I wish I could rip these up, his stupid letters.
They found their way into my heart, I should've known better.
To open up another portal to him and his lies,
And now i sit on the hardwood floor and cry.

I wish i could drown in my tears,
And fade away.
I'm tired of hoping and wishing for better days.

I wish i never known love,
Cause it messed me up, tore me up.
Total corrupt. disrupt.
Made me look down,
And couldn't see what's up.
What's what.
He took everything, his "i must"
Havent he had enough?

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Just_jim said...
Jan. 15, 2012 at 3:09 pm
i could feel the anger all thru your words your really talented i love all your work
EMOEMY said...
Nov. 16, 2010 at 5:39 pm
I honestly love how you don't sugar coat your words and as you prepare for the final blow you sharpen the blade as anger and emotion wells up :) your very talented. 
JustPlaying said...
Sept. 3, 2010 at 12:47 pm
Magnificent. wonderful
SuperMo said...
Jul. 14, 2010 at 8:03 am
yeah that makes sense. So try to look deep into your heart and find all the positives and they will triumph ovre all your bad feelings that you are having. No matter how bad a situation feels there always is a silver lining, if you look for the silver lining it can totally switch you around and show you the positive as well.
SuperMo said...
Jul. 13, 2010 at 7:07 pm
Anytime! u deserve it! keep up the amazing poetry but try to swing it in a good positive outlookish way...
ShernayB. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 13, 2010 at 8:44 pm
I try, but I only right what I feel. and when i feel.
SuperMo said...
Jul. 12, 2010 at 5:19 pm
Wow! thats a great poem and reallllly deep... I'm sorry that thi shappened to you, but dont give up on love because of this, its just a bump ijn the road and he will soon realize what a huge mistake he has made. Great poem though...
ShernayB. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 12, 2010 at 9:38 pm

Hey, thank you so much.

I really needed that. 

You're awesome!

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