The Wallflower

June 9, 2010
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They can't hide the appalled expressoions on their filthy faces as i walk by.
Some kids just don't like me,
I don't get why.
They're jealous I tell myself
But i know it's a lie
Maybe things will change
And the worse has already come.

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mandapanda9736 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 18, 2010 at 6:54 am
good job, sort and sweet and to the point, and a relatable meaning to it. nice job :)
_Elsy_ replied...
Sept. 18, 2010 at 8:17 am
thank you, your comment just made my day haha
xBaByGiRrL22x said...
Sept. 17, 2010 at 10:23 pm
i likee this alott. itz really deep and one of those pieces u kno alot of readerz can relate to. awesome jobb. the rhyming makez it even more powerful. plz keep writingg! ur really good.
_Elsy_ replied...
Sept. 18, 2010 at 1:00 am
thank you so much
xovanillatwilightxo This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 22, 2010 at 1:07 pm
This made me a little sad because it made me remember a time in my life when I felt just like this.. and I still do sometimes. But things will get better! I really do enjoy this poem, great job. Write on!<3
_Elsy_ replied...
Aug. 22, 2010 at 6:04 pm
thank you :D
loveshortstuff11 said...
Aug. 14, 2010 at 9:56 am
I really liked this poem!
squidzinkpen said...
Aug. 10, 2010 at 6:11 pm
It's very relateable to the daily lives of many teens and pre-teens. I really the shortness and how you managed to pack so much meaning into such a small space. Big things come in small packages I any rate, very nice work!
_Elsy_ replied...
Aug. 10, 2010 at 6:44 pm
thank you :)
squidzinkpen replied...
Aug. 10, 2010 at 7:43 pm
If you don't mind, could you comment on and rate my story, "Heart of a Lion, Head of a Serpent", please?
_Elsy_ replied...
Aug. 10, 2010 at 8:20 pm
sure, i don't mind
squidzinkpen replied...
Aug. 10, 2010 at 8:34 pm
Thank you so much!
_Elsy_ replied...
Aug. 10, 2010 at 9:01 pm
if you get the chance can you read the Others and An It?
squidzinkpen replied...
Aug. 11, 2010 at 8:58 am
I'll get on that right now!
Lonleydandy said...
Jul. 29, 2010 at 7:49 am
I like it :D
moonpetal replied...
Aug. 6, 2010 at 8:48 am
This was good, you did but a good amount of emotion. :) Like your profile, nice XD Ducttape yay! Uh, I like the 5-6 lin. Kids are so mean to eachother IDK why ethier. Meanys. But yeah VERY good piece!
bkcrider92 said...
Jul. 17, 2010 at 12:13 am
This is so beautiful! It sends a great message and i really feel the emotion =D Thanks for commenting on mine btw =)
_Elsy_ replied...
Jul. 17, 2010 at 7:08 am
Cigg.Sunn said...
Jul. 12, 2010 at 9:49 pm
I've seen people write about this sooo many times, but I love the way you made it come to me as somthing new! :D I love that it's short, straight to the point, and amazing. 5/5
_Elsy_ replied...
Jul. 12, 2010 at 9:56 pm

thank you so much.


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