the minister's twin daughters

May 22, 2010
By woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."


He was a minister a man of God and the father of a
Sightless angel and a deaf demon
They were inseperable twins but
The minister was forced to sell his demon child
to pay for such a haunting past
he sold her to the Devil and she was taken
to the mad underworld where she was crucified, guillotinded and cremated
she was later reincarnated she became the Devil’s daughter
she was raised based on hatred and vengeance
her mind was stained with jealousy
she was a warrior whose mission was to execute angels
as well as any creatures against her kind
soon she was to take her father’s throne but first she had to
execute a certain angel in heaven whom was her twin sister but she did not know
so she passed the fiery gates of hell and headed towards heaven
the poor sightless angel was in a forst by a stream
she was singing with such a melodious voice
she was wearing a white dress
she had such beautiful eyes with colors unknown to mankind
her hair was long and golden
her halo lightened her dark path as her melodious singing attracted birds
and all kinds of souls
but as she was singing by the stream she was unaware of
her brutal demise to come at the arrival of her demon twin who rose from the water
she was wearing a black gown with the fragrance of dead souls she executed
and a black veil covered her fearful face and her black hair was soaking in blood
but you can still see her fiery eyes they were pure evil and more horrifying than the Devil’s Himself and her presence was more paralyzing than Death’s
she stood there powerful with her glorious flaming wings
a sick smirk dawned upon her hidden face inspite of her sewed lips
she approached her twin slowly as every melodious word came out of the sightless angel’s lips the demon took a step forward and readied her sword which was soaking in blood and reflected dead souls screaming for reincarnation
soon they were standing face to face before the very eyes of each other
the water was being agitated by wind now but the poor sightless angel
did not notice the presence of the brutal stranger nor the vague sense of danger
that was arising soon the Devil’s daughter lifted her head up
slowly and rased her sword up high before stabbing her angelic twin
the sword penetrated the sightless angel’s heart and she fell into the water still singing
her soul was escaping with each melodious word she sang
and her smile never left her face as the sunset splashed the sky with red
but just then the deaf demon released her sword from her left hand
which she took to cover her heart with for it was bleeding
her blood was overflooding as she collapsed into the red stream
she had accomplished her mission and found the missing part of her soul
their bodies layed there lifelss floating upon the red stream for vicious vultures to feed on
but not for long for they were soon to be dragged into the lost underworld where the deaf demon would be crowned goddess of the underworld where she would rule the dark and lost kingdom of the underworld along side of her father and as for the sightless angel
she was to be reincarnated into a demon…


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on Aug. 29 2010 at 7:12 pm
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
19 articles 0 photos 106 comments

Favorite Quote:
"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."

yeah

thx

and lol


on Aug. 29 2010 at 7:11 pm
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
19 articles 0 photos 106 comments

Favorite Quote:
"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."

lol yeah thx ;]

on Aug. 29 2010 at 12:55 pm
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I'm not"
"Somewhere betweeen us talking, you saying I deserve better, and you making me laugh when I wanted to cry, I fell in love with you."

And they shouldn't! I love the way you write! This one reminds me of spiritul warfare

on Aug. 29 2010 at 12:16 pm
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
19 articles 0 photos 106 comments

Favorite Quote:
"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."

OMG THANKS I DONT THINK ANY OF MY DARK POEMS HAVE A HAPPY ENDING LOL ITS MY STYLE CUZ IM INSPIRED BY EDGAR ALLEN POE AND HAWTHORNE :]

on Aug. 28 2010 at 10:08 pm
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
61 articles 36 photos 216 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I'm not"
"Somewhere betweeen us talking, you saying I deserve better, and you making me laugh when I wanted to cry, I fell in love with you."

Wow, this was insane, but I liked it. It might be better of it had a happy ending, but then again, life doesnt always, so we souldn't pretend. I love your wording, and the way you get the vision as you read. <3 it!!!


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